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The Scale (Short Story)

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What is The Scale (Short Story)

WebNovel で公開されている、StreamySpider の作者が書いた The Scale (Short Story) の小説を読んでください。Located within a dark room a man is tortured for his past. His captor the judge of his sins. The man goes through horrendous pain, yet he does not once ask for forgiveness nor question his cruel punis...

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Located within a dark room a man is tortured for his past. His captor the judge of his sins. The man goes through horrendous pain, yet he does not once ask for forgiveness nor question his cruel punishment. *** I wrote this because me and a few friends did a competition among eachother for short stories. There wasn't a particular subject to write about, it just had to be short. This was the story I wrote and decided to post it here for others to read and/or give their opinion on. P.s. I'm curious, do you think the man deserved it?

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