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The Mercurial Mage

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A mage begins his journey to learn and discover magic. Alone except for his dreams, he wishes for the ability to rise and match the exploits of his ancestors. Blessed by strength, cursed by chaos, he harnesses his powers to rise and become a beacon of hope to the kingdom.

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Async0929
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MilordInk
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So. What I've seen so far is a novel with great potential. It's a good read, the author uses a wide variety of words, and the descriptions are worded so that you can immediately picture the scene. Give it a good look, and leave some feedback as well, there are things the author can improve on I would say, sentence structuring and grammar are the main points to improve on. Milord out.

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