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The flashes op twin brother.

作者: Etiger789
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SUPREME GODDESS :What do you desire? Money and wealth? Glory? Honour and pride? Authority and power? Revenge? Or something that transcends all of them? Whatever you desire I CAN GIVE. Now mortal what do you wish for. Mc:can you give me a drill. SUPREME GODDESS :???????,IM SORRY I DONT THINK YOU HEARD CORECTLY LET ME REAPEAT MY SLE.... mc:I heard you the first time and I said I want a my drill. SUPRRME GODDESS :'what's wrong with this stupid mortal.'"wh,why do you want a drill." mc looks at the supreme being and then at his transparent self.The mc was looking at something that the supreme being couldn't.In the middle of his chest there was the tiniest of swirls tho negliable to some it wasent to the him. The mc smiles And looks to the supreme godess with a smile so genuine even the supreme godess can't help but be mesmerized. Mc:ah ha ha hehe hahahaha,why I chose a drill over all others things I could have. well it's pretty simple really, it's because...it's because...I believe ... ........................MY DRILL IS MY SOUL..................... (AN"will anyone get the reference to what sort of powers he will have.")

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MohamedRost
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DaoistZoid
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GURREN LAGANN!!!!!

ElG0hary
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I have to say i liked the novel but i have to say **** for harem it destroy any thing you put it in f** harem dude stop it the novel is great but harem is ****

amaturewriter
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I like it but damit the structure is ****ed up....pls fix it...**: if harem max 5 anymore and its stupid....anyway good luck and dont neuter MC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

DORAEMON_2V
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WHY DROP AUTHOR BOSS!!!!! ANYONE WHO WANT TO CONTINUE THIS SERIES😍😍🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏📿🛐🙏🙏🙏📿📿📿🙏📿📿🙏🙏📿📿🙏🙏📿📿🙏🙏🙏

Daoistskyshaker
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this story is very adoptable and everything is just the Barry's brother is to cheap.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Etiger789
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Thanks for all the support. Thanks for all the support. Thanks for all the support. Thanks for all the support. Thanks for all the support. Thanks for all the support.

Horny_Dawg
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Fanfic is very good. The only thing that bothers me is the name of the MC. It simply does not match. it has to be a western name. but that doesn't change much is just an opiate my person .. good job

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Brian_Fisher
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I dropped by chapter 3, abilities to op at start makes entirety of story pointless Since he is to op it stops his ability to advance or be given a challenge One punch man even though to over powered at start is made to be funny this isnt

Carrotwarrior
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handsome_pikachu
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This story cracks me up for all the wrong reasons, the update stability is okish, char development is OK but the rest is just for the lol, is a good read for the lols doe

Maurz
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Was good until it turned into a written version of the supergirl tv show. Kai is never even shown using his abilities............. :/ ......................................

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GodOfAdventure
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Very very very very very nice to read. 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

Touya_Dono
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Don't drop it. Don't drop it. Don't drop it. Don't drop it. Don't drop it. Don't drop it. Don't drop it. Don't drop it. Don't drop it. Don't drop it. Don't drop it. Don't drop it.

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what is his first wish????....i simply dont understand....please anyone explain................................................................................

Lazy_NEET_Cat_UmU
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Everything id good but the writing cqn be improved.....special the talks or speechs of someone or thinking.....then it will be best.....keep it up.....

Juanito_1_2_3
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Very good story, I like how he handles the plot and the Mc. I hope it continues ...✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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