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The Children of Heaven and Hell

作者: Safron
Fantasy
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What is The Children of Heaven and Hell

WebNovel で公開されている、Safron の作者が書いた The Children of Heaven and Hell の小説を読んでください。Two brothers find themselves in a sticky situation as one of them gets kidnapped by the ruler of the underworld. Will he remain the pure soul that he is or will his heart sour as his brother fails to ...

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Two brothers find themselves in a sticky situation as one of them gets kidnapped by the ruler of the underworld. Will he remain the pure soul that he is or will his heart sour as his brother fails to save him? This is a journey filled with angels, devils and whatever's in-between

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I just want to say that at the time of me writing this review the story only has 6 chapters. Writing Quality: Its great! Sentences have good flow and paint a pretty vivid picture for the reader (me) and I enjoyed reading. Little to no grammatical issues and spelling is fine. 5⭐ Story Development: This one is also great. Plot is interesting and intriguing (at least to me) but some people might not enjoy it because of how young the story is (6 chapters). 5 ⭐ Stability of Updates: I can't really say anything good or bad about this part of the review since the story is pretty young. So I guess 5 ⭐? Character Design: Okay this one has to be my favorite part of the story so far. Each character has depth and motives suited to each person. Everyone has a personality and the characters aren't your generic / shallow MC's. The only characters that I have a problem with are the "god" and the angle, I don't see how the god's motives and actions make any sense? He is pretty lenient for a god... Otherwise I think the characters are pretty fleshed out, at least as fleshed out as you can get for 6 chapters. 5 ⭐ World Background: The world is a fantasy setting. But while reading the story I got kind of confused because the Author never states the exact world details so this world has LED lights and stuff while also having fairies, elves, and dragons. But this might change in future updates (and if it does I'm going to come back and update this review). 4⭐ If you made it to the end of the review (congratulations) and your still wondering if this story is worth the read, it definitely is. Although it's young I would say it's a good start and worth it to pop this bad boy into your library / lists.

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