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Take’s Hidden Path

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What is Take’s Hidden Path

WebNovel で公開されている、Oofdiditagain の作者が書いた Take’s Hidden Path の小説を読んでください。Yo, I’m back and just as broke so definitely don’t own Naruto, Danmachi, or any of its assets... like cmon if I did would I be writing trash novels on here? IF YOU RECOGNIZE ANYTHING IN THIS NOVEL FRO...

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Yo, I’m back and just as broke so definitely don’t own Naruto, Danmachi, or any of its assets... like cmon if I did would I be writing trash novels on here? IF YOU RECOGNIZE ANYTHING IN THIS NOVEL FROM SOMEONE ELSES WORK I DO NOT OWN IT WHAT SO EVER...DONT AND I MEAN DONT COPYRIGHT STRIKE MY SHIT YAAA HEAR ME? Have a nice day

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AGoodTaco
AGoodTacoLv3AGoodTaco

Amazing!

Spelloyal
SpelloyalLv11Spelloyal

This fanfic really has some problems, like the development of the MC which was not very good and the other characters have a very weak presence and seem unimportant. But these are acceptable problems that I would expect to see in a beginning author. I personally am not very picky (especially with fanfics and free content) and I really liked the story. Overall it is a good fanfic, it may be a good idea for the author to read other danmachi fanfics like Wish Fullfiment System and study the intention among the characters to improve their fanfic and bring the story to life. Thanks for the good job author-san !!! (Sorry for any errors i used google translator)

Oofdiditagain
Oofdiditagain作者Oofdiditagain

Yo your least favorite shameless author that donated his own powerstones to his novel YES ITS ME... well im here to explain a few things 1st dont except anything from this novel I am a noob when it comes to writing 2nd If you dot got anything productive to say or viable reasons as to what you dont like about my novel just leave 3rd If you are not enjoying my novel leave you arent needed her go fInd something that will tickle your fancy

DiperZ
DiperZLv3DiperZ

Un gran fanfic si, pero la gramática sinceramente es una mierda, es ilegible le saca todas las estrellas a la trama y a los sentimientos una mierda cuando lo edites bien le daré otra reseña

MonsterCreator
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StormeShade
StormeShadeLv13StormeShade

I actually love this it's a good story I like the development so far also i love that take has a companion. LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLL

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