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SON OF DUNE

作者: Kingoffrogs
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What is SON OF DUNE

WebNovel で公開されている、Kingoffrogs の作者が書いた SON OF DUNE の小説を読んでください。Let me make it clear, dune is not my creation. What you're about to read is a piece of fan fiction, a work inspired by the original.The book Dune introduces us to the main character, Paul Atreides. Th...

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Let me make it clear, dune is not my creation. What you're about to read is a piece of fan fiction, a work inspired by the original. The book Dune introduces us to the main character, Paul Atreides. The bene gesserit instructed his mother to have a daughter, but she disobeyed the reverend's mother and decided to have a boy. Lady Jessica was meant to give birth to Paul and only Paul, but one day, she lost control of her body; she was able to choose the gender of Paul, but in her womb, a second child was formed, and he was called Damon Atreides. Lady Jessica had given birth to two boys, but on the day the twins were born, they were put into a room to let Lady Jessica rest. but not minutes after this happened, one of the children, Damon, vanished. Duke Leto searched for his youngest son Damon but was not found, and no evidence of kidnapping was shown. he pressed himself into work and focused on Paul to become the next duke after him. The question was, where is Damon Atreides? The answer is that the baby was transported to planet Arrakis and raised by the freemen people. they called him the young worm

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MrIIIo
MrIIIoLv5MrIIIo

there were a decent amount of mistakes in writing, but in very wird ways, which makes me think the author doesn't proofread. the story starts in a narrators point of view for 3 chapters, and it's just so bad i couldn't stand it (i continued till chapter 4 btw). In chapter 4, there was finally some dialogue. Now let's talk about the mc. He is a reincarnator because he got some wishes. as Paul's twin, he suddenly gets teleported to arrakis as a baby and he grows up there. At ten years old, he is super strong and allat, defeated multiple Fremen warriors because he has instant mastery. Wears a crimson stilsuit(?) and gives food to other kids, which were in his inventory, to gain their loyalty. It just seems like the author had some ideas, didn't care if it would end up well and just mashed it all together to form this. Perhaps if he got rid of some of the weird stuff like crimson stillsuit and star lord mask and fleshed the introduction out from the pov of characters, it could've been better.

Greta_traps
Greta_trapsLv13Greta_traps

Great fanfic so far keep up the good work

wizardzinger101
wizardzinger101Lv14wizardzinger101

I’ve been looking for a Dune fan fiction and this one just hit all of my check points I hope this series continues and updates are frequent 🕺🏾🕺🏾

_DEKIM_
_DEKIM_Lv1_DEKIM_

The only thing I didn't like was the protagonist's powers. But even so, I think this novel is above average.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

TheAligatorFam
TheAligatorFamLv4TheAligatorFam

it's shockingly good. I am on chapter 12 and till now it has been amazing, the writing quality is actually amazing

SATTAMX8
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DaoistP112ss
DaoistP112ssLv1DaoistP112ss

Great fanfic, there aren't many of Dune, I hope you don't abandon it. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Maluop
MaluopLv4Maluop

Have low expectations when reading this.

jjjakio
jjjakioLv14jjjakio

Nice please don’t drop

supermaniac
supermaniacLv13supermaniac

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Dark_Symphony
Dark_SymphonyLv4Dark_Symphony

Amazing fanfic

H3adHun73r
H3adHun73rLv4H3adHun73r

GOOD 5#!TE, ME NEED MOOOOAAAAARRRRE!!!!!!!

Emmanuel_1_A
Emmanuel_1_ALv14Emmanuel_1_A

Great fanfic. Hope you see it to the end.

Lord_Y
Lord_YLv14Lord_Y

Great fanfic keep up the good work.

ClanAxe
ClanAxeLv14ClanAxe

Thanks for the fanfic and everything is great so far.

Ricky_Prianto
Ricky_PriantoLv13Ricky_Prianto

Keep up the great work author and please don't stop this magnificent art work.

PixelLord95
PixelLord95Lv14PixelLord95

Nice…………………………………………………………………………………………….

Mike_Davis
Mike_DavisLv13Mike_Davis

it's perdy good read. One of the few well written stories that has decent length chapters. interesting and compelling. give it a read.

KingLettuce
KingLettuceLv2KingLettuce

Fanfic has decent grammar with few mistakes here and there with improvements in later chapters, even with the mistakes it is still easy to understand. There are a lot of time skips and it certainly feels a bit rushed, but overall I enjoy it just fine even with its little mistakes. Keep up the good work Author!!!!!!!!! ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………………………

Salty4life
Salty4lifeLv12Salty4life

great Fanfic . .......,......

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