Son Of A God

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It's good but not good it's basically Self-Insert Mc in normal Percy jackson so you know cliche stuff no hard feelings for the author maybe he should improve his story telling skills instead of going in the same route as the original story took..

I like what i read here so i am giving an early review even tho its a really new story :) also i sorta want him to meet Kratos and explain that Zeus lives again

This story is my childhood come to life. I cant wait untill we meet kratos!! Looking forward to more ................................................................

Love for this is all I could feel it was just a scroll and tap then *BAM* instant connection one of my childhood books were revealed In a new light with a twist of my two hobbies reading and games hope to see a little dragon born style when he conquers the gods and adds a kratos style twist with other uniquely-god touch with useing there element against themselves.

If your going to make your own story stop Piggybacking off the original. it makes no since to follow the same timeline of events and just to follow percy aS a lackey. He is kratos son and has done nothing to show he is relateD besides glowing hands and a anger issue. This was a pg13 rip off of the original with an extra character

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I am a big nerd when it comes to crossovers but this one is something else, The story gets more interesting when the character mentions about kratos.

Bamjrr, can continue this story? If not, do you mind contacting me through discord. You can find me in the web novel writers thing. I would love to pick up your story

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The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. Every story plot in all the chapters is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I like a characteristic of all your character especially your main lead.

So I didn’t really like this novel. It’s really well written and based on the categories for rating I can’t go below a 4/5. That said the reason I didn’t like it is because this story seems to be written by someone who is peripherally aware of the plot of the god of war games and has only ever watched the movie version of Percy Jackson... yeah. The riordanverse is rich and colorful and so well fleshed out that everything meshes well. The Percy Jackson movies are crap that take the bad parts of the books and leave out the good while magically aging everyone up by four years which in itself ruins the last half of the first Percy Jackson series. This fanfiction in particular is very good and I would recommend it to anyone who has not read any of the Percy Jackson books or played the god of war games. If that is the case try it out you might find it fascinating.

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The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. Every story plot in all the chapters is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I like a characteristic of all your character especially your main lead. I also hope that the authors continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you for your hard works and don’t drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel. Even though I spent a stone spirit I still hope you carry on your novel. I hope can read more and more a chapter every day. Your novel makes my life colorful and not boring.

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This is a nice mix between original content and the original work each story has Up's and downs it's does have a few flaws but what story doesn't it is a refreshing read I loved the original works and I'm curious what you will do this story has Alot of potential and I'm excited for your future works good job so far man have a good one ( just plz don't drop this this has potential to become one of my fav novels on here)