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Rule breakers

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What is Rule breakers

WebNovel で公開されている、OliviaJackson の作者が書いた Rule breakers の小説を読んでください。Just a random story :p read if you want ig...

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Just a random story :p read if you want ig

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Buih Cinta di Bangku SMA

Cerita ini berawal dari persahabatan dua gadis cantik, Chika dan Mayang. Mereka bersahabat sejak masih sekolah dasar, hingga mereka beranjak dewasa. Awal perkenalan Chika dan Mayang terjadi di hari pertama mereka masuk sekolah dasar melalui pertukaran lauk bekal makanan. Sejak saat itu, pertemanan mereka begitu akrab. Semenjak duduk di bangku SMA, keduanya jarang bertemu. Dan, cerita ini dimulai ketika selepas UAS, Nilai mayang yang jeblok di sekolah menyebabkan dia harus ikut bimbingan belajar di sebuah bimbel. Di sana, dia bertemu dengan seorang pemuda berandalan yang tampan, tapi begitu buta terhadap cinta. Raymond nama cowok urakan itu. Pria itu begitu tampan, namun dia seolah tak mengenal cinta. Sejak kehadiran pria itu, Mayang dan Chika mengadakan pertaruhan. Siapa yang bisa membuat Raymond jatuh cinta, mereka akan mendapatkan hadiah. Jika tidak ada yang bisa, maka siapa yang akhirnya mencintai Raymond dinyatakan sebagai orang yang kalah. Chika yang memiliki koleksi topi import akan memberikan beberapa koleksi topi itu pada Mayang jika dia gagal menaklukkan Raymond, sedangkan jika Chika kalah, dia berikan beberapa boneka untuk Chika. Bagaimanakah kisah selanjutnya?” Pada siapa Raymond akan berlabuh? nb : Cerita fiksi ini di adaptasi dari kisah nyata yang pernah dialami penulis. Adapun nama karakter, instansi, serta tempat sengaja dirubah demi menjaga nama baik yang bersangkutan dan juga instansi terkait.

Akhmad_Fajar · 若者
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63 Chs

My Creator System

Von is an 18-year old man who lived a pathetic and harsh life in his previous life because of him not having the energy core that most of his peers have. He lived a life full of danger and loneliness. At the age of five, his parents chose to abandon him in the city of Penia, which is full of people who commit hideous crimes. Murderers, thieves, and even the Dark Organization have established themselves there. Given the chance to be reborn, not in his previous physical body, which does not have a talent, but into a new body which is pure and brimming with a bright future. Von starts to embark on his journey to greatness... But life is full of obstacles and mystery. Von will do anything within his power to reach the top of this world. ***** When Von's consciousness started to leave him, he heard a loud noise in his mind. [Ding!] [System found a suitable host for assimilation!] Von heard a voice, which he could not comprehend if it was coming from a woman or a man, but it did not really matter.  What Von wants to know is who it is, but his will starts to crumble, his sliver of life begins to leave his body, and he becomes unconscious. What Von did not know is that the unknown entity seemed to continue uttering words that he couldn't deduce within that short period of time. [System Initiation] [System successfully installed!] [Ding!] [The system is trying to establish a connection with the host soul...] [Ding!] [The system is successful in establishing a connection.] [Beginning to adapt to the host...] [The system's assimilation to the host soul has been completed!] [WARNING!] [WARNING!] [WARNING!] [The system finds that the host is on the verge of dying. Finding a suitable countermeasure...] [The system found that the host body had incurred severe damage due to an unknown reason]. [Starts analyzing the host's circumstances] [Ding!] [The system found three appropriate measures. The countermeasures are as follows:] [Immediate Restoration] -The host body will be fully restored to its peak form [Enhance Regeneration] -The host body's regeneration capability will be enhanced by 1000%. [A Reincarnation Wheel Shard] -The host will be able to be reborn, but the probability is low. The host has a 0.0001% chance of being reborn. [Loading..] [Loading...] [Due to the host's being unconscious] [The System will randomly choose a suitable countermeasure] [Ding!] [The host got the Reincarnation Wheel Shard!] [Beginning to Activate the Reincarnation Wheel Shard] After that, the unknown entity seems to do a shocking scenario. Von's bloody body appeared to be surrounded by a strange light that no normal human could see or comprehend. Then a white and dark ball of light seemingly floats above the body of Von. It directly flew into the sky, and completely vanished. The body of Von seemed to be decaying a few seconds after the ball of light left. Then it turned to ash and to none. Leaving nothing, not even a drop of blood. ***** [Host can now create, produce, generate, construct, and compose anything with an equivalent exchange cost.] [Reminder: The higher the value of the item, the higher the quality of the creation]. [Host, what do you want to create?] Xavier looked at the distant horizon. His eyes were red, and his aura was ominous, and his gaze reflected a cold glint in them. He looks like a demon who is ready to devour an entire world.   He smiled devilishly and said, "System, can you create an entire world?" Come and experience how an orphaned young man can dominate and become the ruler of the world. Disclaimer: I do not own the cover image; all credit belongs to the rightful owner. Simply leave a review if you want me to remove it.

Nil00 · ファンタジー
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This is a review of the first two chapters. The main character is an abused 15 year old girl named Olivia. She tried to runaway from her parents with her other five siblings four years ago. Only she was caught by her mother. Four years later she is still returning to the siblings original meeting place in hopes of reuniting. The plot is confusing. The plot doesn’t make sense if it was set in the real world ( the cops would have been called in due to the fire if nothing else). If it is set in a fantasy world, there should be elements added to the setting. Additionally, the is a change from third person narrative to second person narrative at the end of the second chapter.

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