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Reverend Insanity: Hunting Heaven

作者: Topeue
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What is Reverend Insanity: Hunting Heaven

WebNovel で公開されている、Topeue の作者が書いた Reverend Insanity: Hunting Heaven の小説を読んでください。Just before the final fight against Heavenly Court, Fang Yuan deduces that the Venerables will revive after the destruction of Fate Gu. With this in mind, he prepared for his last rewind of time. Fang...

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Just before the final fight against Heavenly Court, Fang Yuan deduces that the Venerables will revive after the destruction of Fate Gu. With this in mind, he prepared for his last rewind of time. Fang Yuan stole dream realms, cultivation resources and immortal apertures before finally self detonating. He swims back up the river of time and finds himself in his old zombie immortal body, right after Hu Immortal blessed land's earthly calamity.

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EvilBlueCrystal
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The interactions, dialogue, and pace are perfect. Maybe include descriptions about the surroundings when there's a change from one place to another to make it natural. The plot can focus on events the original skipped and different outcomes or missed opportunities where the character takes a different approach for gaining resources. Avoid introducing and abruptly changing locations without purpose, they should serve a purpose, such as setting the tone, advancing the plot, or revealing important information. Don't skip the growth and progression, like cultivation, training, sects, and learning, include new abilities. It's better to include the summary of current skills and resources at the end of a chapter. Include memorable character quotes. You can also change the pov to other relevant character of the current plot. If the protagonist forms a team or recruits important members, dedicate chapters to explore their backgrounds, plans, thoughts, and significance to the protagonist's organization, don't immediately abandon them. Plot idea template for creating smart characters: Character A thinks he is the strongest and plans for the treasure but his pawns escaped his control, Character B ignores the original plan and plans to take everything for himself and others who he created an alliance, Character C is actually a spy that ruins their plans without knowing of their rebellion, Character D has a scheme in place and takes advantage of their fight to reap the benefits but is stopped by Character E during his escape.

Uchiha_Patriarch
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This is a great idea on the author's part. I feel that it could work out well, if they can commit to it. Anyways, great work, author! Keep it up, hope you don't drop.

TheWorthyOne
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great idea. Please dont drop! b b .

Stryzxn
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Really great fanfic so far, the writing quality is top tier.

0rochi
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I have enjoyed a lot reading, hope it is not dead. Thanks for writing and sharing. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Nike13K
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Haven't read it yet, but any author who writes a fic for reverend insanity is based AF and deserves 5 stars.

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