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Returner's Odeyssey

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Are you joking now aurora, this is rek my own mate', she said in a confused state, 'He's mine now', aurora replies in defense. This is more of a shocking news, how on earth is aurora now Rek mate was this some kind of joke. Luna turned to Rek in confusion, she needed him to clarify all this. 'I am so sorry Luna, I can't continue lying to myself, you're not worthy to be my mate, I just found my true love,the one my heart beats for and it's aurora, I didn't mean for you to find out this way', Rek said softly. This has to be a mistake, Luna thought now confronting her so called best friend who had just stabbed her at the back a betrayal so full of jealousy. Luna confronted aurora, Luna is now more savage and aggressive her strength increasing more as her anger increases, her eyes now glowing so yellow, black veiny markings appears on her face, her teeth becomes pointed and growing long and sharper her voice becomes deeper mirroring her angry and primitive persona. 'How dare you',Luna says about to attack her best friend aurora but Rek comes in the way 'you are nothing compared to aurora, you're just a court jester and a weakling who's not worthy to be my mate ', Rek added defending aurora She just finds herself denied by her mate, he rejects her. This has brought terrible pain in Luna's heart, she can't live without her mate, it's never possible for a wolf to live without their mate there was nothing left she cried. Luna a strong and powerful she-wolf Princess was now rejected by her mate this is a terrible moment. A terrible pain which is now in her chest a painful agony and she can never live the same again. Rek never loved her or Could his mother be responsible for all this or her best friend just got jealous, all this thought kept running through Luna's mind as she decides to take her life. The worse moment that can ever happen to a wolf is if her mate dies or gets rejected. This rejection has now threatened to cut her life short. Love really hurts.

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Man where should I start? Let's start with the character "designs" Aside from the poster none of the characters are desribed what they are looking like. Like their looks, personality, traits, etc. The author might've glossed over it. Also I should warn that this is just polite critism for the author to improve later on in the future. While reading there are some bad grammar like the word "we're" when it's supposed to be "were" in the sense it's taking place. Then there's parts that don't make sense. So the MC ran to the bathroom to see himself in the mirror right? So he can see proof that he did indeed go back in time. While in the next line it says that Yui slammed the door open and stomped into his ROOM. Then in the next line the MC is talking like he is in his room. How? Isn't the MC in the bathroom looking at the mirror? After that, did he just go back into his room and closed the door? What would be the point in that? Plus it didn't state that either so idk what's going on in that part. Anyways this is my take on chapter 1. Take it as polite critism please. Thank you.

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Sasha_Anderson_7905
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That's is great of reading the chapter 2 writing. Well skill ability hmm intresting by Shikamaru character something different lower skill specially intelligence ability now 1 rating hmm, I think 🤔 this character body health mind is so good but, something weekness of brainess anyway I waited for new chapter 3. Thank you for this story chapter 2 reading story I'm really like it for learning skill about some new characters details.💕💗😻🤗

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Good story by this book and some kind thought interested 😊 I'm looked.❣️🌟 (´⌣`ʃƪ) ♥ okay this story about the things great hmm nice theroy that's.well I can't take anywhere words but this created books are such good doing now.😃💗📃

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