Reincarnated With A Badluck System

The most shameless author here... I just want you to know that the MC acts naive and annoying, unlike his age in the early 30s chapters...........

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as a fellow degenerate, I hate dramas......... exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp

This starts off an okay funny prelude to a perverted romp but then guickly jumps the shark taking itself too seriously and skipping wide swathes of development. It becomes basically a non sequitur with random trash protagonist cliches happening out of nowhere and back filling a chapter that skips thirty two years of life. many stories have completely ended in that time frame. the character seems to lose there intelligence as well. the story seems retoconned even with Vadicus hating the mc for having a different dad despite him pulling them off the streets and them going to the streets despite the mom being a powerful mage in her own right. it's really really silly.

The update schedule is tight, the characters got charm, and the writer got his tongue-and-cheek humor conveyed as he tells his tale. I've read some of the author's previous works and he's come quite far on improving both writing quality and language, whilst he's still not perfected his use of the English language I would assume most readers wouldn't find much fault if any (No problems which detract from story quality). The story takes its time, but it never grinds to a halt, if you're looking for a fun yet perverted story I'd advise you to pick this one up and give it a go.

this is just sad.... like... really sad.....................................................................................................

Another case of excellent world building and inadequate character development and plot. The stage gets set with reincarnation+system and MC is born as a child then we have a 16 year time skip. The author just randomly throws whatever he thinks up & then tries to run with it. The plot is barely coherent. I almost got my hopes up then was immediately let down

Thought I should warn ya’ll that there’s Yuri since the author decided to completely leave that out of his description of the story. Not sure why he would warn for in**st but not yuri.

I won't recommend this its like trying to read a book with missing pages another thing is sometimes things in the book don't make sense, kind of like the characters are made stupid just for the sake of moving the story. At the end of the day, people read stories to enjoy themselves, I'm not enjoying this at all.

DONT READ! THIS IS NOT A COMPLETED STORY! Also the Mc gets told one of his skills will basically cause extremely strong enemies to hunt him and the more he uses it the more danger... what does he do? uses it in the next couple chapters. and then the story ends...

Just great. I loved it, I was hooked from the first chapter. I'm not a big fan of kinky stuff, but what I read really made me laugh and made me enjoy reading. I am someone quite serious with my reviews and I have to point out that I would have liked to see the main character (not being a baby) in the other world (something 14 or 13 years old according to the logic of that world) and more about magic, But I loved it. 5 stars.

you need to truly complete this story for my no for our sake

Liked the story but the same as the authors other work do not invest coins if the book is dropped.

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There Is lack of world building and character personality . No sustainable growth can be seen in either the story or the characters. Giving a pass to it.

This has potential to be better than lewd symbiote. Keep it up author.

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no respect for women .......................................................................................................................

Look, I really do want to like this story. Yet it feels like reading this is more of chore than actual enjoyment. The characters, while not terrible, are rather unrealistic and samey. The plot itself is good! The premise has potential and could easily be something interesting. However, the execution falls flat due to the fact that plot points seem contrived and random with no real indicators of where the story is heading. Feels like I'm sitting in a car with a blindfold on.

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