Reborn into Hyuga

so... the author fails to establish a solid foundation for the story. We don't know when, where, who, and how. we only that he is born as a hyuga. We see his mom die in the first chapter. Two guys are introduce and the author fails to properly tell us who they are beside one being a servant and the other one is an elder. He never really tells us who they are to the MC and gets them all mixed up. He forces the plot with no explanation and his cliches are done horribly. Grammar is horrible, and the reason i didn't give it 1 star is cause at least i could read it. i dont recommend to people who are trying to get invested in a fanfic. If you want to waste your time like i did, who was willing to give this fic a chance, then sure, try it out.

8 chapters in and its just boring and too slow. Maybe someone else will like it but its just not my cup of thee. The mc is 1,5 years old.

Fantastic! Looking at the reviews, I was really biased towards this wonderful naruto fanfic for a moment, but fortunately I put my prejudices aside and read it. First of all, this story will give you the villain you are looking for! Logical, intelligent, c♡♡ning and ruthless. The Mc of this novel has all of these qualities. The author conveys the world of Naruto, chakra and Mc's training very well. I didn't see anything wrong or illogical. He is a scientist so he reveals the mechanics behind complex things like chakra, genetics, dna and fuinjutsu very well. Likewise, I invite those who think that Mc is too ruthless to look at the tags. Yes, if you have seen them, you can go and read your l♡♡e, beta, unnecessary saintly Mcs. Because in this novel, Mc does not hesitate to eliminate even minor threat to himself. If he believes that there will be an obstacle in his way, he starts planning to d♡♡stroy it beforehand. In short, this novel is pretty great. There are mistakes in it, but not enough to exaggerate. Even the many popular naruto fictions I read have more mistakes than this one.

Great fanfic, sadly it's too short for such sslow pace. ..........................................................................................

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This is the 2nd time I read this and the story is pretty good. The only flaw I can see is that the author sometimes tries to make his MC act "ruthlessly" in a very cruel way while forgetting that there is a reason why no one in the real world acts like that. Because in the end we are still humans and no matter how evil or "ruthless" we still need each other, therefore risking banishment, exile or death is just you having a low IQ. For example at one point the MC tries to aquire a byakugan and does to in the most complicated and stupid way possible. A high IQ person would just try to do it legally and through work but I guess that would make the story a little bit boring. Another flaw this story could fall into is focusing too much on the MC getting "powers" for example the MC already has learned too many jutsu. The coolest characters in Naruto or DBZ are those that learn a few moves have those as their signature. Imagine writing a story about just Goku making the Kame-ha stronger or increasing power lvl all day... it is boring. So please if you read this, please stop your focus on "powers". In the first place a Hyuga only really needs the vacuum palm and against Kaguya god lvl stuff elemental techniques are useless anyway so why learn them?

My enjoyability rating is 4. But this does have quite a few problems. Writing quality: The translation is often a bit annoying/terrible. The character names seem to sometimes be mixed up and often unclear. Story development: It is fine, but it did feel a bit like the author was tryharding when he had the mc scheme his 4 year old brother to death. Character design: as I said, they are sometimes mixed. They're also sometimes very one dimensional, but there are also some fairly smart characters. World background: Not as clear as the uploader thinks it is, but I understood the big picture.

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One of those fanfictions worth reading.

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Well... yes... translation wants the best... ...........................................................................................

This is what a rational and ruthless mc is supposed to be Writing quality is good... understandable, not monotonous but there are some translation errors Characters are the best aspect of the novel... there maturity and intellect match their age Plot is consistent, well paced, has tension and keeps you in suspense Worldbuilding... its a fanfic Updates are irregular Most importantly, the mc is neutral evil so no romance, harem or savior complex

I don’t know why the ratings are bad, but I really liked the fanfic, the only negative is that the story and plot are very slow and there are few interesting interactions

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Your first novel is better than this version of Naruto, as you know there are many versions of Naruto, so it is bad that you chose the world of Naruto because it became boring. Personally, I am more interested in your first novel, as it is exciting, evil, cruel and enjoyable. I hope you will continue with it and not neglect it, good luck. I am a big fan of your omniscient novel

The novel is dropped i think the author has died

Poor plot and lacking any sense, the secondary characters are not adequately presented and the writing is regrettable. Thank that I can't rate it as 0.

I know this is old but anyone knows the original name please????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

The MC is5 years old and schème to kill others. The plans goes without problems ‘cause he is so smart! I think it’s too much bs reincarnate or not. The grammar and world building are very good. The mc character is unnecessary cold. Killing his brother to avoid slavery can be understood. Killing a 5 years old to get his eyes while he doesn’t have the materials to do experiments, what’s the use?

i don't like it