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Raphtalia

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What is Raphtalia

WebNovel で公開されている、Dario_Barkhordar の作者が書いた Raphtalia の小説を読んでください。A world without emotions. A Man who tries to find them again. Could love save him?...

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A world without emotions. A Man who tries to find them again. Could love save him?

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