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Pulchritudinous | The Hobbit

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"So, you're the legendary wandering wizard? I must say, I'm a little disappointed." "Well, that's nice. I wasn't really trying to impress you anyway. Tell me, again, who are you?" . . . Pulchritudinous (adj.) breathtaking, heartbreaking, beauty . . . !!Gay!!Male OC

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Chapter 1Act One

It was known that six wizards roamed the land of middle earth, but most only knew three; Gandalf the Grey, Saruman the White and Radagast the Brown. So, who was the other three? Two blue wizards and one green.

The races of middle earth only knew one name, The Wandering Wizard and sometimes known as The legendary Wandering Wizard. This was the title of Lucien the Green. Only those he trusted knew his name and those that knew his name knew why he was so legendary.

He wanted to stay hidden because so many underestimated him once they saw him, it was tiring proving people wrong. But Gandalf also knew having the boy around was confusing to people, he liked to play them and irritate them. Why was the boy such a trickster and irresponsible? His mind was once played with as well, past traumas will do that to a person, no matter how powerful.

Now was the time for him to finally come out of his shell and help those in need. Hopefully, his inner demons will not take over and ruin everything that was once set in stone and turn things for the worse.

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Writing Quality 5-Stars Story Development 5-Stars Character Design 5-Stars Updating Stability 5-Stars World Background 5-Stars First of all, before I begin, this Novel is outstanding and I appreciate every second and every word put into it. Writing Quality[WQ]: It is really good and one can understand everything! The content is grounded in facts: Data, research, fact-checking, you name it. It doesn't have a single point of view but roots out opposing viewpoints which makes the story interesting and alive. The word choice is also good, not too complicated so that the average reader can understand what the author wants to tell us! Story Development[SD]: The Story is engaging, entertaining, and - most importantly - the Mc is clouded in mystery which makes us, the readers, want to learn more about him and discover what his story is. It goes onward, neither too fast nor too slow, just perfect in my opinion. I hate it when I read a Story and the MC is stuck in a place for a long period only for the author to drop the story. Also, I am very curious about what his goal is and why he is the way he is, I don't want to spoiler too much. Character Design[CD]: The Mc is very likeable, easy-going, full of energy, warm-hearted but he also has his downs where he is depressed but that's like 1% of the Story. He has a bewitching personality and qualities that make him different; unique! He is imperfect, which makes him perfect because nobody is perfect and that's good. Updating Stability[US]: It's one chapter a day so far and that's good, considering that the author probably isn't a full-time author and has his/her one private life, as we all do. There isn't much to say here, so on we go! World Background[WB]: It is the Hobbit, so there isn't much to complain about here even if one wanted to. But the author makes a good job of describing the world and hasn't made a huge mistake yet. In my opinion, It is a Novel that nearly every fan of the Hobbit would probably appreciate. (An: English isn't my mother language so if there are any grammar problems or some writing mistakes I did, then please ignore them ;)! That said, enjoy the story and stay healthy! ) #CornbringerSquat #HolyJokerSquat #DevilFrameSquat

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