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Pokemon a new beginning (rewrite)

作者: Jordan1908
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Micheal Wells an aspiring enginneering student in his final year at university dies. Due to his atheism and his love of pokemon when he meets a ROB he asks for various cheats and to be reborn in the pokemon world lets see where this story leads us. This is going to be a more structured story based on the original that I posted. I struggle with writing dialogue and fight scenes so if you have any idea's on where I need to improve or ideas on how to write them pls let me know in the comments.

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Chapter 1chapter 1: Death and Rebirth

Thoughts

"Telepathy"

status

"System Speaking"

(names of person talking)

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"Ugh where am I"(micheal)

"I see you've finally awakened"(ROB)

"Ummm who are you? Where am I? How did I get here?"(Micheal)

"In order, I am a Random Omnipotent Being, your currently in purgatory and you got here by dieing"(ROB)

"I see what happens to me now"(Micheal)

"You are taking this rather well for someone who has just died"(ROB)

"You see I was an atheist whilst I was still alive and I didn't really believe in the afterlife or God so I'm just uncertain about what happens to me now"(Micheal)

"I see. Due to your atheism and your love of anime,manga and fanfiction you got sucked into place where people go to get rincarnated go."(ROB)

"I see so what happens to me now"(Micheal)

"Now I ask you where you want to be reincarnated, when you want to be reincarnated and what you want to be reincarnated with?"(ROB)

"I want to be reincanated into pokemon the anime one where everything is very slice-of-lifeish, with all the pokemon I collected from the games with max IV's and EV's, I also want a bagpack with all the items from the games that updates when new games are released in my main world with a pokedex that does the same thing, I also want a system that tells me the Status of a pokemon from its stats to moves to optimal ways to train it to aquire new moves to optimal ways to train it towards a spesific build, with aura and psychic abilities"(Micheal)

"I see your going down the wish fullfilment slice of life route"(ROB)

"Yeah I stressed and struggled so hard to get a degree that I died before I could finish it I just want ot have some fun and relax in my next life"(Micheal)

"I see do you have any specifics about where you want to be reincarnated"(ROB)

"Yes I want to be reincanated as the same age as Cynthia a year before she goes on her journey in Pallet town. I want to be an orphan with a rather sizeable inheritance and a sponcership from professor Oak"(Micheal)

"I see well good luck in your next life and I hope it goes well for you"(ROB)

Shortly after that I awakened in a bed in a 3 story house with a basement where I lived alone.

I see it wasnt a dream

" Ummm Hello, System can you hear me"(Micheal)

"Greeting's host how can I help you"(system)

"Hello system nice to meet you do you have a name, gender, preferd form of adress?"

"Negative host the System is similar to an AI in your original world however if the host gives the system a name the system will then assume a gender and start to form itsown personality"

"I see then from now on your name will be Renata. Renata means Reborn in latin you will be the like between my past and the present that I've been reborn into"

"thank you for giving me a name host from now on please refer to me as Renata"(Renata)

"Okay Renata how to I access the pokemon I have?"(Micheal)

"the PC near your bed functions similar to the ones from the game you can also access it from the watch in you bag or if you are in the wilds you can request them from me"

"I see Renata can you teach me how to use the psychic and aura powers I recieved from my wishes"

"Negative host I can only unlock the abilities for you your best bet is to have a strong psychic type teach you how to use your psychic powers and have a lucario teach you how to weild aura"

"I see. Renata could you please awaken the abilities and give my the pokeballs for my Shiny Metagross and my strongest lucario"

After asking this of Renata awakened my abilities making a constant buzzing sound appear and my body feel stronger and 2 luxuary balls appeared on the bed next to me. I proceeded to go to the basement and release them from their balls and checking their stats.

Name: *Metagross*

Gender: Genderless

Level: 100

Moves: Bullet Punch, Confusion, Metal Claw, ...

Items: Metagrossite

New Moves: N/A

Ways to train: N/A

Name: Lucario

Gender: Male

Level: 100

Moves: Copycat, Detect, Feint, ...

Items: lucarionite

New Moves: N/A

Ways to train: N/A

"Renata why does it say N/A next to New moves and ways to train?"

"Well host this is due to the fact that both pokemon have reached the pinical of their respective species and have learnt all the moves that their species can learn. This also means that they can fuse moves together into poweful combinations i.e. Lucario fusing extreme speed with bullet punch into extreme bullet punch"

I then adressed Metagross and Lucario.

"morning Metagross and Lucario. Do you remember me?"

Lucario responded by simply nodding while Metagross replied.

"Good morning Micheal. Where are we and why are you so young?" (Metagross)

"I had a bit of an accident and ended up back in time before I started my journey. Don't stress though I managed to bring all my pokemon with me" (Micheal)

"I see why have you summoned us"

"You see the insident that flung me back in time also seemed to awaken some abilities in me"

"I see and the fact you have me and Lucario here imples that your abilities pertain to the aura and psychic type abilities"

Lucario looks suprised at the mention of aura

"Spot on Metagross I am currently 9 years old a year before I restart my journey as a trainer can you teach me how to wield these abilities safely"

Metagross seems to take a minuite to communicate with Lucario

"Very well Micheal Lucario and I have agreed to help you with your newfound abilities however, our training will be as tough as yours was with us. Remember there is no short route to power just blood sweat and tears."

"Don't worry Metagross I'm not a stranger to hard work but can you do something about the bussing i can hear in my head it's quite irritating?"

"no young Micheal that is the first hurdle a competent psychic must overcome to meditate and find the frequency that the sound is on and to equilize your minds frequency to it so that other psychics can comunicate with you easily"

"Does that mean that its a struggle for you to communicate with me?"

"Young Micheal at my level of psychic control I can even communicate with dark types, fret not you novice psychic abilities will not impact me negativly"

"I see thank you Metagross can you-" I began to say before the doorbell being rung cut me off "Metagross who's at the door"

"A young woman named Delia"

Thinking back through my memories I remember Delia is 12 years older than me an seemed to have adopted me as a surroget nephew after my parents died, everyday she'd come over, make sure I was studying for the trainer exam and drop off a home cooked meal, and when Ash was born I would go around to her house to help out.

I see its been a few hours and I havent turned up for breakfast so she probably got worried and came to check on me after dropping Ash off to school I thought

going upstairs I let her in "Morning Delia"(Micheal)

"Morning mikey is everything alright you usually come round for breakfast"(Delia)

"Everythings fine I stayed up late studying last night and overlept this morning"

"I see I know you have the Trainer Exams next week but do remember to look after your health, and don't forget to come around for dinner this evening"

chuckling "don't worry I wouldn't miss it otherwise I might starve."

After seeing her off I headed down into the basement to start my training with Metagross and Lucatio.

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