Pokemon - A Bright Adventure

After reading a few Pokemon fanfics, I decided to try to make one of my own. Instead of a potential, I decided to try my own spin in the pokemon genre. (and no system as well) I hope that gives you an incentive to read this fic! (totally not writing this to give myself a 5 star review)

I have read till chapter 8 and I must say, for being a fanfic about pokemon, I can say for certain that this book is worth it. The style of writing is very good and grammar is correct making it easier to read. My only suggestion would be to eliminate the point at each paragraph , yet, it does not really bother the reader so it is actually ignorable

Nice start! It's an interesting story, the character design, story flow, and word-building are to the point. I like it! There aren't any grammatical errors in the story, and thanks to that, I can read with ease. No spoilers are needed since it's better if you try this story. Give it a try, it's worth your time!

I read like 4 chapters and i can tell you unless the arthur does something dum in future this fanfic is awsome the grammers great(english isnt my first languge but i dont see mistake)the update stabilty cant tell (since only 4 chapter are out)but if its going to be the same pace then great. The story Development from the looks of it is more on the realistic side (my opinon is the best side of pokemon fanfics) thats all i can say for now i would add more in the future and i hope the arthur wont make this a harem like other fanfics (i hate harem and i feel like there is no need for one and makes 0 sense and ruins any romance )

Good start to a promising novel! Lemons? Probably not, but I can't wait to see! Writing quality is there, all we need is some quantity! Rooting for you author!