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parelel world traveler

作者: shokon
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What is parelel world traveler

WebNovel で公開されている、shokon の作者が書いた parelel world traveler の小説を読んでください。...

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Shaine_chan
Shaine_chanLv2Shaine_chan

First and foremost, I like the idea set in the story. It is intriguing but the writing quality could be better. The author needs to work on the proper use of punctuation and consistency in POV. BUt then again, it's too early to leave a review for the character design, stability of updates and story development. One thing is for sure, this story has great potential. Job well done Author!

Patience_Agboola
Patience_AgboolaLv4Patience_Agboola

The book is good and I want more so keep it up

gamer_souf
gamer_soufLv1gamer_souf

I like it cuz I am the auteur heheheheehehh

Tifala
TifalaLv1Tifala

The idea is interesting, but it would not hurt to highlight the dialogues through - or ". It is difficult to judge by one chapter. But I hope the author will continue to develop the plot.

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