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One Piece: The Alpha Wolf

作者: RedPinetree
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What is One Piece: The Alpha Wolf

WebNovel で公開されている、RedPinetree の作者が書いた One Piece: The Alpha Wolf の小説を読んでください。Mako D. Carson was a terrifying abd odd existence!! Born with wolf ear and a tail, Mako was destined to be different from everyone else, but it didn't just stop there.Mako was extremely intelligent, l...

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Mako D. Carson was a terrifying abd odd existence!! Born with wolf ear and a tail, Mako was destined to be different from everyone else, but it didn't just stop there. Mako was extremely intelligent, learning and picking up on things in matter of minutes or even seconds. He was skilled in combat, becoming proficient in all types of hand-to-hand combat techniques. He was strong, adopting the workout he had once seen in an anime. He was also extremely hard to entertain and easily got bored. Above all else though, he was lazy!!! Though it was hard to surprise him and change his usual bored expression, Mako was exceptionally confused one day when he woke up and found himself in the world of One Piece. Mako now travels through the world in search of a way back home. However, he soon realizes that he doesn't need to go home, because why would anyone want to go back to a boring world? This was a fictional world, and he figured he might as well have some fun while he was here

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For students

For all the students out there. You have potential. There is no person in this world that is actually dumb, all you need is practice. But the right sort of practice not just doing something over and over again that has no benefits on you or your work or your future. Stop paying attention to the rumbling sounds of outside noise, for they are not living your life. You are. You are the only person that is living your life. What others say do impact you yes, but you need them to stop letting them impacting you before it’s too late. And honestly in regards to the world you are living in, it is kinda never too late. So go ahead and think about the kind of life you want to live, what is something you need to get done in school that will get you to that specific future? What is that specific grade you need to get? What is that specific job you want to have? Think about that job that is most beneficial for you, and now think about the things you need to get done to get there. What college you need to go to, what grade and things do you need to get into that college? Now make a little secret agreement, a pact, or a promise with me. That the next 6 months you will only focus on yourself, your studies and your future. It’s a hard process but at the end I tell you how to make things easier Read the chapter and see if you would like to make that promise with me, hopefully we will both be able to get to a better place. Everything that is written here, is written by me, you can share it with people you know and use it but also have to say where you got it from. Hope that it will be beneficial for you ♥️

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RX78
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Stability is the lowest for reasons obvious to others, writing quality is standard, but definitely better than the standards here. There is a typo in the synopsis but I also don't know much. But I do love one piece so here's a 4.4 for you

Majeh7
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Itsmepat
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peter3135566
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Stability and release rate could be better, but the story is plenty good for it to be read despite the release rate. Characters are cool, fighting parts are amazing to read makes me wanna beat someone up just like the MC... If you want more then just dont waste time and start reading!

StressedByHW
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The Mc is not to goodie and not to evil it’s perfect but more to the side of goodie but atleast he still has some evil in him The Mc is not to goodie and not to evil it’s perfect but more to the side of goodie but atleast he still has some evil in him The Mc is not to goodie and not to evil it’s perfect but more to the side of goodie but atleast he still has some evil in him The Mc is not to goodie and not to evil it’s perfect but more to the side of goodie but atleast he still has some evil in him

hyung_nim
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Just basing on the synopsis i think it will be a great story... Just don't make it the pace to fast or it will ruin the story... And keep updating ........................................

Absolute_sword
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It's a good beginning and i specially like your MC, he is an interesting character. I'm looking forward the following chapter-------------------------------------------------------------------------------

SirDheNNraM
SirDheNNraMLv6SirDheNNraM

Nice fanfic so far.......but its just slow development of the story line..please be sure to update it regularly for the next future chapters.....but thanks tho...

UselessYato
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I’ve loved the story so far, but the updates are kinda random. Other than that, I’d say that the story is turning out perfect and I can only ask for more.

Majeh7
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LostRarity
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It’s a story with a lot of potential keep up the good work.✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅😘😼✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✊️😘😘✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✊️✅👾👾👾👾👾👾👾👾👾👾👾👾👾👾👾✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅👾👾👾👾👾👾👾👾

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Heezus
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Writing this review after just finishing chapter 7 So far its not that bad. Unlike most authors on this website that only try to implement their OC into the story, this author isn't afraid to create multiple OCs and create a unique plot. Story is developing quite well too with Ok character development. The author has given a lot of information about the MC so far which is a thing that most author don't really do. So Im really looking forward to reading more chapters in the future and I highly recommend it to others to read.

Promethee
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I don't know yet about the stability of updates since there's still only 3 chapters but I really like the premise. It's quite rare for me to read a fanfiction on this site who don't feel like it's been written by a kid and it's refreshing :) Like I say it's only begining so I may or may not change my review in the future but the start of this novel don't look like a FF but more like a real novel. Meaning that the writing is quite better.. (I don't know if everyone will understand what I'm trying to say ^^)

Coeur_noirs
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Inconcistence from strong,lazy,bored,aggresif who dont like is tail to be touched to sleepy beauty who dont bother people touch and pull is tail ,,,,

TurtleManiacc
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dont drop it !dont drop it !dont drop it !dont drop it !dont drop it !dont drop it !dont drop it !dont drop it !dont drop it !dont drop it !dont drop it !dont drop it !dont drop it !dont drop it !

InnerVoice
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Sorry to be a stick in the mud but if the dude was born with wolf ears and tail in the modern world, I’m sorry to say but he would in fact be dead or experimented on till death be his release. Some may try to argue with me saying how he’s unnaturally talented and smart so survival is a sure thing for our MC, but unless you tell me that he can evade capture from the world’s militias even as a baby then I suggest you shut up. 2: you said he got his training exercise and battle techniques from copying anime characters? I call that BS. I mean sure most of those moves that involves the physical body like martial arts are possible but impossible to learn. Mostly because anime characters strength are usually far beyond the limits of what a normal human can mustered. Part wolf or not, it is impossible. But then again, if he was raised by hermits within a secluded forest then it might be possible for him to survive long enough for him to be able to train his body in the ways of combat and survival. BUT THEN AGAIN!!, no matter how strong someone becomes, in the age of technology how far can our MC go before being capture or killed when the commonly use devices and gossips of the people become the eyes and ears of the governments? All in all, I just want to say that this story is flawed to the point of repulsion.

PuffyFluppy
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interesting

RedPinetree
RedPinetree作者RedPinetree

A writer of many harem fanfictions that would've been great hits had I not dropped them. However this one is different!!! It has potential and by constantly updating and furthering the plot I shall strive to become the #2 fanfiction writer!!! Just you wait Einlion, I shall eventually catch up to you!! Though I may not surpass you, I shall attempt to match you neck and neck!!

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