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One Piece: Kozuki Shinnosuke

作者: Kaushik_15
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A young man by the name of Lucien Durand was travelling around the world. He had managed to get away from his half-sister and step mother. Unfortunately, they managed to corner him in Yellowstone National Park. After beating him up a bit, he was thrown in one of the hot springs there. The water temperature determined to be 94 degrees Celsius or 202 degrees Fahrenheit. Lucien suffered the burning sensation and managed to get out the spring after two minutes of struggle, but later succumbed to his injuries and second-degree burns. This is a story where Lucien met God shortly after his death. He is reborn in Naruto as Naruto Uzumaki. ---------------------------------------------------------------- WARNINGS: -This is my first time writing a novel. I am also not great at writing, so there will most certainly be grammatical errors and other writing errors. I have tried writing in the past, but they almost always end up as journal entries. This may happen to this novel as well. -This may not be for those who do not like or have gotten tired of the main character getting cheats. -I will be giving some form of cheats to my main character. I am neither a genius nor am smart so even if I want my MC to be one, he probably won't be. -I would appreciate if those who do not like the story to leave and find another story to occupy your time with rather than leave a review that states this novel is trash, etc. I do not care really about criticisms regarding that, but it would get annoying. - I will try my best to fix some errors, but this novel may not last long as I am just writing it for passing time. So, do not be surprised if I drop this story suddenly.

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Drako_0692
Drako_0692Lv1Drako_0692

The story is pretty good so far, both the main character's personality and the minor characters. My only complaint would be the gifts from the gods they give it (at least the system is irrelevant and harmless in the story).

Shun_Woill
Shun_WoillLv1Shun_Woill

History and good training but the context should be developed a little. Like for example talking about their training or their activity as a bounty hunter during this course there this time even if it is not very developed

I_am_truck_kun
I_am_truck_kunLv12I_am_truck_kun

3 chapters in and it looks promising.

SlowWittedSong
SlowWittedSongLv1SlowWittedSong

interesting writing style but try to expand the dialogues and add little details to make the story seem more complete. I'm very interested in where your story will lead, please continue

Scarface3699
Scarface3699Lv4Scarface3699

Everything moves too fast and the dialogue is mediocre, as a result you're not invested in anything. Everything is the bare minimum description like fights and people. All in all pretty bad

Kaushik_15
Kaushik_15作者Kaushik_15

please write a Review it can help in the advancement of the story.

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