Thoughts?

I just finished reading Percy Jackson and the Olympians: the lightning thief, and I couldn't help but be disappointed in this fic of mine, and now u don't know what to do, I'm determined to finish it and be done with it but at the same time I can't help but want to do a rewrite set in the Percy Jackson, I already have an idea how it would be structured and what kind of changes I'd make.

Like start during Hephaestus's birth and rather that the Hogyoku he'd have the first true magic which is Denial of nothingness( I'm assuming from the little research I've done) and the third magic heavens feel, have him journey around the world defeating monsters to gain favour from Olympus and ascend, this would also be during the war against the titans, have him meet heroes of Greek myth and fight or befriend a few titan before earning his sit Olympus.( 30 or 40

Chapters long)

( Harem or no? comment to decide that)

And then after that, we'd do a time skip to the modern times, during the event of lightning thief, I don't know how he would fit into the narrative yet but I'll read the rest of the books and think of something.

What do you guys think of that?

Yay or nay?