The Flame Within the Dark
Dreams....they came to me every night, dreams of a higher civilization. Beings I could not comprehend with my feeble mind. They held sway over the universe, mending it to their liking. Spreading their light across the world until the darkness consumed them. In a moment of weakness, they were overtaken, their king dethroned and sealed. Their home left desolate and forsaken.
I am the last remnant of their light, the everlasting flame. The one who will conquer the darkness.
~~~~~~~~~~《MHA Fanfic》~~~~~~~~~~~
This is my first novel(or fanfic)/time writing for a large audience. Any feedback or things I could do to improve are appreciated as long as it is constructive.
This is really a practice fanfic, to be honest, so that when I decide to make my original novel, I can have hammered out as many flaws and mistakes as I can as a newbie writer. Please do not hold back(if you read my comment history, you will know I don't hold back, so neither should you. If I make a mistake, call me an idiot and point it out).
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