Naruto: Shadow Mage

it reads exactly like a chinese translation. grammatical errors, weird conversations and AU elements, nothing seem right.....................

THIS is most likely a translation, terms from the cultivation world are often used, but the translation seems to be quite good. but history is not for me so 4.

setting aneh ga masuk akal, kualitas dasar ninja itu pasti ada hati"/minimal waspada, kalo mau ngeremehin pasti dibelakang jugaan jonin ga mungkin selemah itu , pemimpin clan pasti veteran ga mungkin secerobih itu&author buat character serasa (cuman aku yg pinter seluruh dunia bodoh) sekian

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