Naruto form start refuse the marriage of Mito Uzumaki[FanFiction ]

Everything is average but I couldn’t read for more than 1 minute before my head ached from the writing, it’s worse than a machine-translated (mtl) novel.

well.... at least i give you a 4☆ for effort... i just had to read the badly written title to understand that you barely have any english knowledge since having grammar mistakes on the novel title is a mess.

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Here to support the new author. You might not be experienced and will probably drop the fanfic but if you actually like writing, don't give up. People might complain constantly so get used to it and never surrender. I have a few quotes for you. Take one step at a time. Giving up is worse than being stuck in infinite loops of failures. It's very easy for us humans to find constant new passions in life but need guts to remain faithful in one specific project and skills to profit out of it. I'm going to be honest. Your work right now is not even readable but I believe it will get so much better one day. Writing a book is like planting a tree. You put a seed of idea inside the ground then pour words of water everyday consistently and you won't notice it but the tree will start growing slowly and surely until oneday it starts bearing fruits of money. Ofcause, not every tree grows fruit and the quantity between each trees will always vary. It depends on the quality of the seed. So make sure that the idea of your novel or fanfic actually have potential as well. Was it confusing? If it was, apologies. I kind of start typing what I have in mind everytime I'm giving advice, lol. Bye :)