webnovel

My Review System: Starting with the Naruto World.

作者: TheWandaShip
アニメ·コミックス
連載中 · 6.6K ビュー
  • 2 章
    コンテンツ
  • レビュー結果
  • N/A
    応援
概要

~ Synopsis ~ Fujimoto Natsu is an aspiring video content creator. Despite his hard work, many of his videos did not perform as well as he had hoped. Faced with dwindling success and the need to make ends meet, he decided to pivot to a more popular trend: creating review videos. “If I’m going to do this, I might as well start with something that I am most familiar with.” Natsu mused, settling on the ever—popular series, Naruto. Natsu originally aimed to appeal to a broad audience. However, to his surprise, his first viewer turned out to be none other than the Second Hokage, Senju Tobirama. Soon after, the Third Hokage, Sarutobi Hiruzen, followed, along with the fearsome Uchiha Madara from the ninja world. ~ Editor’s note ~ Hey guys! A few months ago, I asked for a replacement series to replace my “Battlefield” fanfic that I was translating. And today, I’ve finally found one. The raw is “Start by giving Senju Tobirama an Inventory of Naruto”, and there’s actually another person who is translating this as well and is still ongoing, Nobody2nobody. I actually found this MTL because I came across his translation earlier today. But some things that were mentioned inside just did not make any sense, and it ruined MY immersion of reading. So, like the battlefield fanfic, I will only be cleaning up this series. I WILL NOT be doing the extensive editing as my Marvel fanfic, but I will promise that I will try to remove any and every content that breaks the reader immersions. For example, in the other translator’s version, in the earlier chapters, there’s a sentence: Hashirama remarked “Madara, you are like Voldermort”. Yeah, no. Hashirama should not have known about Voldermort at all .-. For those who are supporters of my Marvel series translation, rejoice! Because i will be using the same format as i translate this series as well! I know the title says "Review System", but i'm not sure if there's any actual system.

タグ
4 タグ
あなたも好きかも

One Piece: Deriving All Things

Sanders has crossed into the world of One Piece, blessed with a unique ability: he can derive and master any power—Haki, Devil Fruits, combat techniques—everything can become his. To survive and grow stronger in this chaotic world, he joins the Marines, seeking structure and safety. But fate takes a dark turn when his adoptive parent is ruthlessly murdered by a Celestial Dragon. Sanders vows revenge, yet before he can act, he is captured by Sengoku and Kizaru, locked away in the depths of Impel Down. In the infamous prison, Sanders uses his power to derive new abilities from legends around him: the Moa Moa no Mi, the Fusion-Fusion Fruit, even Barrett's fearsome Haki. As years pass, Sanders grows more powerful, biding his time. Finally, he decides the moment has come—he walks out of Impel Down, shaking the world to its core. "You fought Kaido in a fierce battle; derivation time for the Azure Dragon Fruit reduced by one year." "You battled Whitebeard with all your strength; Gura Gura no Mi (Quake-Quake Fruit) successfully derived." "You clashed with Big Mom; her indomitable Steel Balloon Physique is now yours." At the Summit War, Sanders challenges the might of all three Admirals singlehandedly. Marine Headquarters: "He was once one of us; now, we regret it deeply." Boa Hancock: "I’ll stand by Sanders—let’s declare war on the Celestial Dragons!" Nico Robin: "Only he can bring me true safety." Join Sanders as he faces the mightiest forces of the One Piece world, deriving power from the strongest to fulfill his destiny. -------------- Access 30 chapters in advance on my Patreon: p@treon.com/OneFic This is a translation work; I do not own it.

OneFic · アニメ·コミックス
4.9
60 Chs

レビュー結果

  • 総合レビュー
  • テキストの品質
  • リリース頻度安定性
  • ストーリー展開
  • キャラクターデザイン
  • 世界観設定
レビュー
ワウ!今レビューすると、最初のレビュアーになれる!

応援

この本の詳細

General Audiencesmature rating
報告