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My Power is Upgrading Everything (Rewrite)

作者: Nine_Clouds
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This story is about a man named Putra Indra Santoso who reincarnated as Huo Yuhao. Witness his journey in Douluo Dalu's universe where he discovered and fulfilled his ultimate goals. My Grammar is not the best, but hope you guys like it. (An: I don't own anything besides my OC) Also, support my Patreon: patreon.com/NineClouds69 to read advanced chapters and motivate me to write more chapters

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Reincarnated and traveling to another world, Eiji Seiya initially thought the world was normal. That was what he thought before he met the heroine and protagonist of the franchise he had watched in his previous life. Not only that, after he awakened the Inner Voice System to grow strong by complaining about plot, heroine and protagonist in his heart to get many rewards. He is determined to increase his power so that he can save his home world, the world where he was reincarnated that was hit by the disaster "Honkai" and save beautiful girls like Kiana, Mai, Bronya, Rita and others who had tragic endings in the original works! "I will save them all!" However... Everything went smoothly... Eiji earned rewards every time he changed the plot in another franchise. It's just that... What's wrong with these heroines? Lala Satalin Deviluke who was supposed to be engaged to the protagonist instead became his fiancée. Sona Sitri suddenly called him to the student council office and said she wanted to make a deal with him. Rias Gremory who was supposed to ask the protagonist for help to solve her political marriage problem with Riser Phenex inexplicably came to him. The girls were disgusted at the protagonists of their respective franchises. Something was wrong here! Not only that, heroines like Kotegawa Yui, Sairenji Haruna, Akeno Himejima, Kuroka, Serafall Leviathan, Grayfia Lucifuge, Sakurajima Mai, Ai Hoshino, Kasumigaoka Utaha and others... They like him! All the super beautiful and sexy women that many men in the world covet surround him and leave their respective protagonists. Grayfia even betrayed her husband. Eiji who saw all this was dumbfounded. At first he was confused as to why these heroines were surrounding him, but gradually he realized and knew that it was all happening because ... His inner voice! - The plot that has been changed by the MC: To Love Ru: 83% Highschool DxD: 82% Shinmai Maou no Testament: 92% Oregairu: 89% Saekano: 84% Oshi no Ko: 100% Rascal Does Not Dream Of Bunny Girl Senpai: 100% Mieruko-chan: 89% Trinity Seven: 38% This is the plot change process of the latest chapter and will change as the story progresses. By the way, the grammar at the beginning is bad and will improve as the chapter progresses. However, my writing style will not change much because this is an inner voice novel, which means that there will be many reactions from each character. Oh and in chapter hundreds there will be a group chat to prevent the loss of interaction between the heroines. It's a special chat group for the heroines in the MC's harem. - Get the latest chapters faster on my patreon. Support me on patreon to keep me motivated to write more chapters: www.patreon.com/DogLicker

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473 Chs
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TFH
TFHLv6TFH

Well.... the start was good. the grammar is good, the wincêst is good and there is scathach too. MC basically has a cheat system that grants him gacha tickets from ALL over the OMNIVERSE. THis is based on Doulou Dalu 2... until here is good, but then mc thanks to the cheat system, gets sooooooo many skills and abilities that's its takes more brain to understand his huge status windows than to read the chapter. MC reincarnates at 6. and as of chapter 42, he is 10 and has a literal empire in a NEW Continnent that's only 1600 km away (LOL). Has almost a dozen level 90 subordinates, a cult over 50.000 members of 100% girls under his name. Has 3 martial spirits with 2 of them being already a cheat on their own.... So yeah... its kinda boring read chapters that 30% are powerups.

LyCifer
LyCiferLv3LyCifer

I havent found much of Douluo Dalu 2 fanfic. it doesn't get enough attention as other because the last part of the story is butchered mercilessly. i hope you give us fresh and entertaining story that's better than the original. And the chapters so far have been very nice to read.

Venerable_Adam
Venerable_AdamLv4Venerable_Adam

i hope you back for good i enjoyed your work i was wandering if you ever gonna make a "Katekyo hitman reborn" fanfiction i hope you do cause i love your writing and "Katekyo hitman reborn" is my favorite story

Melshan
MelshanLv7Melshan

HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM

DaoistjcJwtW
DaoistjcJwtWLv1DaoistjcJwtW

Sería Interesante si le das protagonista el legado del dios dragón o la reencarnación del dios dragón o la línea de sangre del dios dragón????????

Aditya_0814
Aditya_0814Lv12Aditya_0814

well why there are no negative reviews...well whatever. work is great , op MC and harem well its all go I guess.but why he is giving his mother so much attention I don't hate but for some reason I can't connect with her other harem members are more likeable to me I mean she is doing nothing but still she got all the benefits and became most powerful , management is done by someone else , training is done by someone else , work where required power is done by MC ,why is she there if she is why she got best of all things I mean just act spoiled all day and even her love is made up of illusion she was yandere for his father but after mind wash by illusion she got hota for MC. Her love is real or not i don't even know. why did she become the main wife. also the character of MC is confusing the author shows MC love his harem so much but if he gets serious on side he starts complicating things like in one chapter when matter of wife comes he indesively dodge the topic why did he do that I mean he sleep with them he love them but why he can't accept them what is he a Playboy .....all other things are great I guess...nothing to complain.

Stiven_Callejas
Stiven_CallejasLv2Stiven_Callejas

this is much better than the previous one, keep it up author by the way tries to slow down the advance of strength of the MC in the previous one this was very exaggerated and ruined the story a lot, also you can be patient in delivering things to your mother

PUERKO_Senpai
PUERKO_SenpaiLv4PUERKO_Senpai

I have read up to chapter 151. besides the fact that the author starts a new arc without having finished another (he goes to the third world without having finished the first). I think the biggest problem is that the MC is a SLAVE to the system, The system can block 99% of his abilities whenever it want. I will delete this review if the situation improves

MaBoySpicyChicken
MaBoySpicyChickenLv2MaBoySpicyChicken

The rewrite version has been better so far. I haven't noticed any problem and enjoyed it so much. Thanks for another wonderful fanfic, Nineclouds! You're one of the best!

InnerVoice
InnerVoiceLv6InnerVoice

I love reading doluo dalu but like they need to fkin focus on one story at a time like fr. Doluo dalu 1 isn’t even finished yet and theres already like doluo dalu 2,3,4,5 each with dozens to hundreds of chapters. They need to chill tf out. Anyways I love doluo dalu 1 and 2

ekatn
ekatnLv4ekatn

I was thinking of giving this novel a 4* but after chapter 10 you won all 5, ........now give us what we want, you know what it is. ps: I would like to ask you not to make the mc very dense in things related to romance it becomes heavy to read.

Ibrahim_NiR
Ibrahim_NiRLv13Ibrahim_NiR

Solo tengo elogios para este fin jajaja No he leído muchas fic's sobre DD2 pero de los que si, este está entre los dos mejores... Eres grande

kirahix
kirahixLv3kirahix

beginning of the fanfictions I did not like the mission that forces the mc to perform a task in another world when he has not finished gives the impression that he is being manipulated, so I passed if not strongly that he kills tang san

Ulescu_Mihai
Ulescu_MihaiLv5Ulescu_Mihai

Great fanfiction don't give up on it has potential 👍Great fanfiction don't give up on it has potential 👍Great fanfiction don't give up on it has potential 👍Great fanfiction don't give up on it has potential 👍

Toby_S
Toby_SLv4Toby_S

whatever you do please don't stop this fanfiction it's extremely interesting to read and looking forward to reading to the ending. You're an awesome author 🙂🙂🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

Fra1zu
Fra1zuLv2Fra1zu

Kenapa gambar nya Si Beban? Hmm~ menarik, setidak nya jika ingin menggabungkan kedua dunia, tarik The End di sisi mu di saat genting Pembantaian sepihak (˵ ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°˵)

Lector1apresurado
Lector1apresuradoLv4Lector1apresurado

thanks for bringing back the story please do not do like the last time since these stories of douluo dalu 2 there are not many and being a very good one I hope it arrives as a heavy ruler, there is not much to see or classify except the writing and the updates that are followed and the writing is easy to read and understand what the author is trying to express

SparkleEyeMole
SparkleEyeMoleLv4SparkleEyeMole

Im giving it 5stars because it has raiden mei cover and please make her the FML pls

Golden_Slap
Golden_SlapLv3Golden_Slap

Thank you for rewriting this book. it's a literal upgrade of the previous one, not only in pacing but also story wise. i hope you didn't hit us with Hiatus again :(

Dio_The_Sage
Dio_The_SageLv13Dio_The_Sage

lets goo .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. *the name in the synopsis is oddly specific

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