MHA: 'Serene' Life in Another World

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Given the ratings I was hoping for more(21 ch). To some extent, the premise is interesting and the story certainly is unique, trying to avoid common plots of other mha fanfics while having decent editing so that there are not any glaring spelling errors. I was entertained by some of the story, but often ripped from it by jarring plot choices or characters. The delivery is average to below average. The worldbuilding is very shallow, with nothing more than stating which world the mc is in and that he has a gta san andres system. Anyone not familiar with both will be lost. It is a small issue for a fanfic compared to the rest though. The characters are also inconsistent with famous characters like endevour not possessing his famous temper, while the mc consistently acts different from his thoughts. It is understandable to some extent that seeing someone being hurt makes him forget his own safety, but his approach to helping is stupid given his situation. Also, there is almost nothing known about the mc aside from him liking san andres enough to memorize the cheats and that he owns a noodle shop. No goals, hobbies, likes or dislikes. Only that he wants to be a hero and thinks evil villans should be killed, also with no reason. The government or others not investigating a quirkless who beat down Muscular with a kitchen knife is a clear example of this stories biggest fault. Believability and internal consistency are sorely lacking. I get that for a fanfic genre of an mc who uses system cheats that there will be a lack of reason for the sake of enjoyment, but it really goes to far. The mc being recognized by Endevour by purposefully letting him win a fight without him flaming in anger or asking why a quirckless is so strong he can create shockwaves with his punches was where I stopped. Overall, you may enjoy it as many seem to. Despite its faults, it is unique and without the poor grammer than many fanics have making it easy to read. But the lack of internal consistency and poor conflict resolution overshadow the rest for me.

Author,. the concept is very new. I mean I haven't read a fic utilizing the gta sa system. Grammar has been fine so far and I am really looking forward to more updates of your story

this is the perfect definition of to not bite more than you can chew 🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄👏🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄

Writing quality : 5/5 MC dump with dump hero complex. Well I'll be dropping here it's just idc for hero types when I saw GTA system I thought we would get a Villain MC. System GTA ✅ MC anti hero or villain ❌ it's an offense to have the GTA system and be a dumb hero

A dead hero character. I do not mean that he is cold and impressive. On the contrary, he is pathetic. He asks for a date in a primitive way, without love or confessions.

Painfully average. Story feels rushed and is poorly thought out. Cringed hard at some parts, like how the MC talked so much about how he couldn't use his guns because of Japanese gun law to stop Muscular when he can just put the guns(and shell casings ejected from the gun) into his inventory as well as how he can't use his Super Punch cheat as he doesn't know if it'll kill him only to end up using the Super Punch cheat a few paragraphs later for no reason. The romance with Fuyuki is also incredibly bland and her existance is entirely relegated to making useless filler content. Go play video games or read something else. There's nothing really worth reading this for nor makes it unique.

First of all I want to say Mc and CJ interactions are hella funny. Story is about MC getting iskeai to MHA with Gta system (with cheats) as you can think Mc is Op with cheats and Character interactions are Too good like Mc with Eri & Mc with his team especially knuckle Guy (forget his name) and Heroine also interesting (with hers quirks, you will know about when you read it😜) Mc interacts with All-might and Deku but not too much (just acceptable levels) and yeah Mc can go to Gta world which is Hella Funny, you guys will love it [To Author: Mc is too rich, so make him get the technology and stuff for surveillance and tracking etc, like Batman & Base for his operations and don't show too much of UA stuff because every Mha Ff has done it and now it's too boring. I hope you didn't drop this, Anyway Goodluck]

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this fanfic has a potential to rise on the top, please don't drop author-san this fanfic is amazing recommended for readers!👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

unique idea, good writing, no +harem+(for now) good grammar 5 Stars I like it keep going Author ..............................................

Great MHA fanfic, has that law and order vide a mix of Deadpool. You can definitely relax will reading this fanfic. Since this story is a early publish I'm not going to comment on Grammer because that can be edited later. The 'flow' of the story was so-so in the start but got better and better later on. The main character is well designed, although some of the interactions could be considered robotic, I think that he is cool. Yes, so my review is gonna be a 5, I would like to thank Gonshido for publishing this on SH and really really really hope it goes far. :)

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Don't know about writing quality since my head auto corrects it. Story development is cool, I really like where this is going. Author destroyed some future canon plots and I really liked it. Character design is good too, but a few warning to some of you. Imo I like people with hero complex but not going overboard with their ideals so much that they are blind of the truth. Mc have a bit hero complex but no problem with killing villains, so if you're into villain mc then you may not like it. Mc also have tendency to be swayed by his emotions, which is ok to me since you'll see a character development later on. So if you're into a perfect mc from the start without seeing the so-called character development, then you may not like it. And also... Mc have a good taste of woman heh (I like normal, shut up hater). Updating stability, seems pretty good so far. World background, I honestly doesn't know much about this word since english is not my mother language. But I think that this is ok too. I like it when mc formed a team, the pitiful duo and the black bandana(?) guy (I won't spoil much). Also learned a fact that Stain used to be a vigilante haha. The author wrecked some parts of canon and I'm curious to see what author will do if this continues

Lovely. One of the most promising novels I have encountered yet. I wish author doesn't drop such great novel without completing it. Very eager for further updates, and looking forward for his interaction between Class 1a. Keep it up ✌️.

This story is great as its grammar is good and has a new concept like a GTA system...but the MC is a SERIOUS as*h*le I mean he has a SERIOUS hero complex and flames Deku because he does not go against bullies but I mean he was BULLIED AS A CHILD and I doubt he experienced that and hes also hypocritical which NOBODY likes just overall an unlikeable person because he doesent he....really didnt do anything for his power...

It's so damn cool.