Metal Evolution

I've only ever read one Chinese novel where a black person was characterized as being a normal person. Im not an SJW and im not going to assume the worst of the authors, but still why is every black person depicted in chinese novels either have to be a stereotype or a barbarian?

The concept is good. My problem is that the Mc doesn’t have the brains to think and plan ahead. Whenever something happens he’s always put in to a passive state where he’s forced to react instead of taking the initiative. I’m fine with this happening once or twice but it seems like this is the case for every major thing that’s happened so far. Speaking of major events - literally every single thing that’s happened so far is him being inexplicably dragged into an accident. It’s like there’s always some invisible force that makes sure everything has to go wrong for him. Again, im fine with this happening once or twice but for this to happen like every other chapter? This just makes it unrealistic. Anyways, this novel had potential but is ultimately ruined by a stupid Mc and forced plot.

the mc seems to be able to absorb metals the concept itself is not bad. The Mc seems like a Man child. he keeps crying and being afraid. he is reckless! after finding himself in an unkown island he directly jumps into a lake not knowing what animals might be inside. He does not even try to understand his powers like his life had to be threatened 3 times for him to realize that maybe he should try to learn. the mc ruined it for me

the author is very obviously biased against non-chinese. the author attempted to put Americans in this book, but clearly does not know how Americans talk, think, or act. for example there's no such thing as a noble in America. Americans don't believe in royalty or monarchies. but that's only the beginning of it. if you're an American you ain't going to want to read this book

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racist, stuupid enemy, boring power, another cliche novel that have arrogant young master.... .. .. . . . . .. . .... . . .. ... .. . .

A PROPER REVIEW Although it has similarities in other novels but hey you can't prevent that. Atleast this novel has its own content especially on how he got powers and turning the moon into a life planet. 5S on writing quality because I can understand it. 4S on story development because I can already foresee what would happen in the future especially these 'intergalactic space' themed novels. 5S on character design because of the unique way on how he got his powers, can't say for the future though. 4S on updating stability because this is a trial novel, don't know when will the next chapter be released. 5S on world background because I love how you turned the moon to a green and lush planet.

petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................

sup y'll the story pretty catchy, not the best but still enjoyable to a certain extent... though the plot at chapter clearly highlight that the author are trying to make the mc an eternal virgin.... maa~ yoi! better some low to mid level 'things' than outright garbage, right!? better not be picky than to suffer from trash being promoted. I'll tell y'll!!!

The review will be quick. I don't really know much about the story since the first chapter was so full of BS that i couldn't even finish it. No need to waste time with this. When a author thinks that he can freely create the first chapter as the most boring thing and treating its readers as having the low IQ of insects, i don't even want to imagine what he will do in future chapters.

Passice MC with a brain so slow in reacting. Story is interesting but world background is not coherent as author mostly forgets stuff he/she is writing and contradicts in the later chapters.

Up to ch20 lol The cat reminds me of another cat(Mech Touch)in a different novel. Hopefully he messes with the MC its good just cant wait to see what happens when he escapes the island i cant wait to see how the Intro tie in with the story

Honestly I was enjoying the novel, it felt somewhat different to me, but hate the MC, he is supposed to be smart, but gives off the feeling he is far from it, also he is pretty much a coward, scared of everything, imma have to try reading it again after and hope it gets better later in the novel

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Com 25 capítulos, a história está ficando cada vez mais fascinante, não vejo a hora dos próximos passos da história. Muitos acham que o MC tem que planejar para agir, mas a vida é cheia de surpresas.

Nice story the plot,play, action and everything in the is nice.The continuation should be fast as the grammar is good .I would like to ask for much updates and reduce the price of the book.I really enjoy it when I read it.