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Martial Peak: The Star Emperor

作者: SMNovels
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  • 49 章
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  • 4.7
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  • NO.200+
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One night, in the Black Plum Village, a baby came to life and the falling stars made their passage there to celebrate his birth. Follow Mo Fan's journey as he becomes the Star Emperor in the world of Martial Peak. *** *** This is an AU, so don't expect to find everything as it was in the original opera. Reminder: I don't own martial peak, only the OCs that I'll make

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0 :Auxiliary Volume
1 :Inheritance Arc

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Mediocre, this is not even average, the author decided that it wasn't enough to make the MC watch his father kill his mother but also decides to continue making him suffer constant hardships until he is 15 where he is currently a voluntary slave in Yang Kai's sect where he creates amazing weapons for free instead of getting a sponsor like normal blacksmiths do, but the grey matter is scarce in this fanfic and the MC seems to lose more grey matter with each chapter I read, the "hack" of this fanfic is that the MC magically gets an ability that is magically extremely convenient for his physique and that magically no one before tried to train because magically now everyone is 1d1ots and only the MC magically persisted in training that magical skill (it literally took him days to train it, other people would take the same time too lol), I don't doubt that in the cultivation world there are 1d1ot people but you can't make the MC the only smart one, it's lazy writing. It's my only complaint since there's nothing more than that in the available chapters, tragedies and training (I have nothing to say about the training but I do about his hack), there's nothing positive either, which nobody points out strangely and I don't think I'm the only one who sees these obvious problems, this deserves an urgent rewrite, someone (obviously I'm not going to lend myself to help) help this author write this story correctly, if there's a rewrite I'll change my rating (honestly I would give less stars because of how bad I felt reading this, in the bad sense of the word)

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