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Magic spirit

作者: Zack_Storm
Magical Realism
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LordSputnik
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Honest Review Total garbage, author's attempt to win a WPC by using extra accounts. Doesn't even match the theme. The Good: It'll be removed after this WPC. The Bad: Should never have been submitted to begin with. The grammar is awful, the chapters feel more like paragraphs, and you can't even follow the events that occur in it.

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I’m a little confused on why this story is so high in the rankings and why it doesn’t match the theme of the writing prompt. The chapters are very short and it’s jarring to read. Feels more like a rough draft for a story. If the author wants to continue writing this story, they should work on it more before posting it and make sure it fits the theme.

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