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Laguna Feast

作者: ayoooo
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What is Laguna Feast

WebNovel で公開されている、ayoooo の作者が書いた Laguna Feast の小説を読んでください。The title says it. It starts from a waiter and a girl who is a food critique. Slow burn is my thing. English is not perfect. So bear with me. Critiques are valuable to me so do splash my pages with co...

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The title says it. It starts from a waiter and a girl who is a food critique. Slow burn is my thing. English is not perfect. So bear with me. Critiques are valuable to me so do splash my pages with comments.

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