Kuroko in one punch man

Ok I'm being a bit harsh but it's F***ING hard to read and the story doesn't seem to be going anywhere and the romance is force/cliche without any explanation and the world background, training, and characters are all over the place. No explanation of the characters past, full names, backgrounds nothing. It has a lot of potential but it really needs an editor.

Love this so much just for the fact that Mc ability match the character so well. Keep it up really enjoying it. There are some grammar mistakes but the plot for me over shadows it with how much I love it

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Stop using periods as commas. That really gets on my nerves that you can be of a level that stupid that you dont know the difference between two things.

I'm back this coming Friday and I've updated almost all the chapters, to make it more readable. but it's not perfect so I'll do my best to improve

Please come back the story is getting good and u leave come on 😶😶😶😶😶😶😶.................... Dont you dare drop this book 😥😥😥😥😥😥😥 Also when is he gonna get seirus on peeking up girls and is any of his baskeball friend going to show up .

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........ idk what to say.. i found it weird when i know that this novel is bunch of other novel mix in together.. for the proof? Just look at the name.. the mc is kuroko.. why he can become yuuki? Why he can become issei? Momoi too.. why she become irene? 😐

The translation and grammar is horridly done. And kuroko isn’t even the harem type so for sing that on him is just wrong. Disgusting even );););););):):);););):);):);):),);),).):):),73);$;!;$;!4$;!;$;!$;!,!;$;!;$,!;$;7;!47;!3783$4);7;

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I like this novellll!!!!!!! Moremoremoremore!! ksjdjundjdnhshhrhbshdhdhdbdbdjsjsjsmdjdudhxhdudhshxbzlaljkalalapaojejwalapskdjkcjckckfkfifudcmccjcjckvlvgxkckgdpzlxlvlvlvuxngkgkxkxckckclckckckco

i pray for not fast to drop/hiatus ..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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