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Journey Across

作者: scarycereal
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What is Journey Across

WebNovel で公開されている、scarycereal の作者が書いた Journey Across の小説を読んでください。Issei and Yuta go on a journey around the world. This world is cruel, close to no one genuinely cares for another being. The world has been completely left to evil....

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Issei and Yuta go on a journey around the world. This world is cruel, close to no one genuinely cares for another being. The world has been completely left to evil.

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I know I should praise my work but, I'm a beginner. I am just flat-out bad at this. My character development is mediocre at best and my pacing is a bit too fast. Right now I am writing chapter two, I will improve with time. Some of the strengths of my story are probably the worldbuilding and story. Take it with a chapter two point of view if you read this later. Also, my weaknesses are probably character development, pacing, and having a lot of motivation. I rate it 3.4/5. I am just a 14-year-old writing a cool story for fun after all. Don't spend your coins on this for now, I don't want you to waste money on me.

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