Infinite growth with my lottery system

I'm taking this 5 star review back as soon as I hear any Bulma X Vegeta. I don't want to read about no dam trunks having to be born. Lol, haven't read yet but if vegeta is the mc I will drop as well.

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can you have mc wish for broly bloodline to be mixed into his with green buff lizard genie on namak forgot his name 😂 also will mc go to other world and about his system can he summon items from other universes like marvel, dc, kim possible cause if so i want mc to summon shego and joker venom.

So much monologue, i mean some of the chapters is all about mc thinking to be "strongest in the universe". Lack of narration, just monologue. And all of a sudden the MC got a "good" idea by making a girl loyal to him and then make her beautiful to be useful. His luck is already hundred times or more, than an average human but nothing really change that will make an opportunity for him that will make us call him "lucky" and still just got stuck in orphanages.

I like the story so far, it is super interesting and it takes my mind off of worries. Thanks for the story!!! Hope you continue to entertain us readers!

Writing Quality : 3/5 Stability of Updates : 5/5 Story Development : 2/5 Character Design :3/5 World Background 3/5 The story get's a bit boring and having a limited harem of 5-10 girls is quite bad. Also , " wasting " 1 spot with a random " ugly girl " feels more of a waist if the number is limited. Slight mentions to cultivation but at the very least he doesn't go full crazy on such a disgusting theme...( even though some are direct mentions.. ) . I'll have a small hope for the harem and +18 parts.. I really hope that can save the story, if that part doesn't work then.. it's basically a 1 star story. . I'll wait and see if it can still be worth reading.

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Writing quality: 3 star Updating stability: 4 star Story development: 1 star Character desing: 1 star World background: 1 star [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

I hope u keep going ...................................................................................................................... .

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esto parece bueno, espero que tenga harém jeje , además si actualizas todos los días estaría genial,,,,,,,,,,,z,,,,,,,xzzx,,,,,,,,,,,,z,,,,,,,,,,,,,