Incomplete System in Marvel

What are you trying to do, you made this rog story..... When Peter was bitten by spider his strength increased to 10 ton directly and later it was at 30 ton but there is no change in stats, his strength, speed, dexterity etc all parameters should have increased but he remained weak.....

Honestly, if the character was just some average reincarnator that had a defunct system, than I could accept the slow pace but your character is literally worse than the original character when they started. When Peter was bitten by the Spider his strength increased be able to lift 10 tons. Your character went through no changes while the system isn't really that helpful for gaining strength unless he grinds even harder than the original spiderman. Your character didn't get Peters intelligence or the strength increase. This is your story and you can write it however you want but you should at least know information about the characters before writing everything which looks like no research was done. Keep going though as it could get better or not who knows.

It's an alright fanfic. Though I'm trying to keep my expectations low, the last few gamer fics I've read and been invested in were all dropped. Also everyone's right, he got bit by the radioactive spider, why didn't his stats change. Like the others said, should've just made an oc smh. This is like a low tier version of the fanfic "The Spider" by I'mjusttryingtofindmyway.

Okay So just quit in the first chapter to save yourself the trouble Extremely Nerfed system which also nerfes spidey No enhancement cement Like strength of 25 tons or spideysense Only can crawl on the wall for limited amount of time Comic marvel world with mutants And F4 running around You can think about reading the book after imagining what the poor mc will go through

So I’m confused about how this story has so many good reviews there’s nothing special bout it the character is weaker Peter and dumber then Peter even though he took over his body and got spider bite is supposed to be a reincarnator but doesn’ have his memories and even the system is trash so why so many good reviews

I am very disapointet in this fan fic a incomplete systeam is a nice idea ect but the problem is that the mc generft is befor he can make something spieder man is a very weak hero compared to other heros or vilains but with the nerf he is no better then a averge human with web schooter and a suit he has no fighting experience ect and the touch al a creme is he can’t get stronger by training with the systeam

I agree with what a lot of other reviews were saying, I won't go into detail but if someone wanna know if this is worth reading or not I would just recommend to give it a shot, and see for yourself how you like it.

what a nerfed spiderman he got bitten by a radioactive spider and he only got a class, the stats havent even change one bit, even the body of spider man in the movie have a big change when get bitten from a scrawny guy to a 6 pack abs dude he also gotten stronger but here his such a nerfed trash

it's a pretty bad story I don't know but I didn't like it one bit is a story about a stupid mc who get the body of one of the greatest minds on the earth but is still stupid and even after a system he is not even stronger than spiderman

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He is playing on very low class field I mean he is Spider-Man. Spiderman without system would have done better. He hasn't even developed any good physical abilities yet started with magic that as well is pretty useless compared to other magic users of marvel.

Honestly the novel is the best i have seen,one of the best.What really bumm3r me out is that after the bite,he didn't gain the abilities known as super strength,endurance etc.Cause thats one of the basics of what makes spider man,spiderman. Though i i really like the novel and get that this change is due to the mc not having a normal body but a gamer body,but still man.so sad

I saw you want constructive criticism so I'll do my best Author-san. Spiderman's unique class idea was a good idea, but the equipment that came with him didn't like the webs that get stronger the higher the strength, I think it should be his natural webs that he generates like tobey's web , and the constant system nerfs I think it's good to add logic to his skills but these constant nerfs will make him much weaker than he should, the perks so ok the dungeons are great very good even the best thing I found, try to make a story background for each level of the dungeon I think it would be much better and there is a way to make him mess with technology like a scientist like the original peter, this would easily make him stronger without being dependent on the system that continues to nerf him science would make him strong even without his Spider-Man powers as an inventor for example why don't he create a technology that would be similar to Batman's utility belt. Anyway this is my review for this fanfic

c pas logique l'homme araignée est un level up genre 10 tonne de force et tout , la c nerf et c pas un systeme imcomplet si tu l'upgrade en allant alors change ton titre vu c pas chinois ou jeune maitre pour une fois ! je mets trois

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Ill be honest I wouldn't of left a review if I didn't see that review about him be needed heavily, this fabrics ratings are too high for that.

Well, most of the reviews are "right" to talk about how Spider-Man is "nerfed" and doesn't have his common strength which is normally 10/25 tons, but I want anyone who read the reviews before the fanfic itself, to have a little patience or not to guide so much by the reviews. The author is not stupid and these changes were made so that he can progress along with the System and can thus become stronger. The mentality of this fanfic (I think so, I'm not the author obviously) Is that it has the same idea as most cultivation stories, which is how the main character starts out weak and slowly rises in level/power until he can fight the heavyweights. (Well try to be as "objective" as possible) If you don't understand blame Google translator.

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This story is good so far your doing great I like it personally so keep up the hard work of writing a story and I really hope you don’t drop this I really want to see a Spider-Man story finished

The story is good. I personally like it and while some of the jokes aren't the best it does make me chuckle or smile. Writing quality is good. Some might say it isn't but this is a fanfic, plus not everyone first taal is engels. anyways, the story is good and it's solid pasing THERE is one problem though. While on could say because the title on what the story is, the writer does "bug fix" with the system and power system in the story. Doesn't seem like a big deal. Till the story goes from Spiderman having what looks and probably feels like wolverine regen(20% per minute thing) to a rather minor regen. Then later he brings it back up again. It's annoying to be honest. The constant nerfing then buffing then nerfing is annoying and while it is what the incomplete system means godamm man, it's annoying. Also in general characters aren't really interesting, but ok But overall it is a good fanfic to enjoy reading. You read for good time passing and to enjoy and it's for you. Author, keep up the good work bro. PS: hopefully don't take to much offense to it. Have a good day.