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In Naruto As Zoro

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WebNovel で公開されている、TengenUzui369 の作者が書いた In Naruto As Zoro の小説を読んでください。I got reincarnated as zoro and experience life...

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I got reincarnated as zoro and experience life

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Bapabooey
BapabooeyLv15Bapabooey

It's only a few chapters in, but my lord it is bad. Story is all over the place, super fast paced, can't even tell who's talking and when they're talking because author doesn't make the phrases any different than just a regular sentence, grammar needs major work, no explanation on anything to do with the world, if somebody doesn't know Naruto, they wouldn't know it by reading this, that's for sure. It feels like it was written by a 10 year old.

Andrew_Bonds
Andrew_BondsLv4Andrew_Bonds

you just need to scrap this or edit the first few chapters. first fanfic I've read having zoro being the main template

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