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In Douluo Dalu with the Naruto System

When he woke up, Ye Zhiqiu found himself in Douluo Dalu's world, and he became Tang San’s neighbour and a young boy. Ye Zhiqiu, who had originally thought that he could only hug Tang’s legs tightly, awakened his main martial arts spirit at the age of six, followed by the Naruto System. Since then, he has gone farther and farther on the road to greatness. ---------------------------------------------------- You can support me on Patreon - https://www.patreon.com/EdwardElite

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Chapter 05 - Cheats May Be Late, But They Are Always Present [EDITED]

Pls, read the synopsis for a rough idea of the story and my thoughts on the future development of the story.

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The previously great quantity of golden flecks of light that appeared, at first gave him a lot of expectations, but when finally unexpectedly it was merely blue silver grass, the sense of disparity caused Su Yuntao to feel somewhat in a bad mood.

"Uncle, you still have not let me undergo a spirit power test, right."

Tang San saw Su Yuntao already wanted to test Ye Zhiqiu so he hurriedly reminded him.

Su Yuntao said without looking back: "No need to test. For this useless spirit, I still have to see one instance where spirit power appeared."

"Let me give it a try, uncle." Tang San persistently said.

Su Yuntao was dumbfounded all of a sudden, turning around, to Tang San's calm and rather steadfast gaze. In his heart musing, this child was seemingly out of the ordinary.

"Very well."

Trying once could not waste much time. While speaking, he handed over the blue crystal ball to Tang San.

Suddenly, the blue crystal ball in his hand began to shine, dazzling blue light starting from a point spread in a flash. In an eye blink, this crystal ball looked just like it was a resplendent gem giving off sparkling luminescence. A cool blue flare showed, unspeakably moving.

In accordance with the traditional test, as long as the crystal ball gave some response, even a single trace of radiance, it would prove by a test that spirit power existed, and at present, the blue crystal ball radiated such dazzling radiance that there was only one explanation.

"Heavens, it actually is innate full spirit power."

Blue-green light released again from Su Yuntao's body, and the crystal ball shot out from Tang San's palm. At this moment, he saw before his eyes this boy's gaze had already become completely different. It seemingly resembled the appearance of a monster.

Tang San naturally also noticed that his situation was different from the other children's test. Feeling uncertain, he asked: "Uncle, what is innate full spirit power?"

Su Yuntao started telling Tank San about innate full spirit power.

Ye Zhiqiu knew the development of the plot, so he didn't feel much, just a little envy. His attention was more focused on Tang San's clenched left hand. It should be the Clear Sky Hammer, right? The Clear Sky Hammer was also known as the strongest Tool Spirit in the Douluo Continent.

After that Tang San nodded his head to express understanding, he then walked out of the six-pointed star array thoughtfully, stood beside Ye Zhiqiu, and fell silent, not showing what he was thinking.

Ye Zhiqiu was also excited, as finally, it was his turn to awaken his martial spirit.

He stepped forward in two steps and stood in the six-pointed star array.

Looking at Ye Zhiqiu who was still there, Su Yuntao smiled and cheered up. Green lights were shot into the black stones on the ground. In the six-pointed star array composed of black stones, golden lights shone more dazzlingly than when Tang San awakened his spirit. The room was covered in Golden light.

Su Yuntao was agitated, and also hopeful. Ye Zhiqiu was equally excited, It had a very big reaction, his Martial spirit must be strong.

But first of all, Where was the Martial Spirit?

Ye Zhiqiu stared at his empty right hand for a moment, why was there nothing???

Su Yuntao was also a little dazed, what about Spirit? Where was the spirit? Such a bright awakening, His Martial Spirit must be extraordinary, but where was the Martial Spirit now?

Where did the spirit go?

Su Yuntao lowered his head to think.

Everyone in the Douluo Continent had a martial spirit. This was common sense. He had never heard of a person without a Martial spirit. If It was not on the right hand then it might be on the left? After all, some people were very special, it might be a mutant martial Spirit. Thinking of this, Su Yuntao's eyes lit up.

"Try raising your left hand.." Su Yuntao said tentatively.

Ye Zhiqiu raised his left hand in a daze, and after a while, there was still nothing.

Now, Ye Zhiqiu, Su Yuntao, Tang San, and even the other children were stunned.

What's the situation? Where was the Martial Spirit?

After Su Yuntao was silent for a long time, he finally suffocated a sentence: "No Martial Spirit, You don't have any Martial spirit..."

After finished speaking, he planned to pack things up. Su Yuntao secretly cursed in his heart, he was unlucky as hell. Today he finally came across someone with an innate soul-power but that person had a waste martial Spirit. The other one was even more outrageous. The Martial Spirit Awakening was so grand, but there was no Martial Spirit? This really made his little heart twist and turn, and he was speechless.

'I think today my luck is very bad' Su Yuntao thought.

Su Yuntao just wanted to leave this place as soon as possible. It was too disturbing.

Ye Zhiqiu saw that the person from the spirit hall was planning to pack his things and leave.

He panicked, " Senior, I haven't even tested the spirit power yet, At least let me test my spirit power."

"You don't have any martial spirit, how could you have spirit power, you are basically useless." Su Yuntao packed up his things and said without raising his head.

Ye Zhiqiu said unwillingly: "Maybe my martial spirit is the power of space or something. Senior, have you ever seen anyone in Douluo Continent who does not have a martial spirit? Just let me test my spirit power."

Su Yuntao stopped packing his things, and then seriously thought about it. He took the crystal ball out and put it in front of Ye Zhiqiu.

Thinking about it carefully, he felt that what Ye Zhiqiu said also made sense. And it was just a test of spirit power, it won't take long.

Looking at the blue crystal ball in front of him, Ye Zhiqiu was nervous and slowly put his hand on it. The dazzling blue light bursts out of the crystal ball instantly, like ocean waves tumbling, and successive waves of blue light were uninterrupted, and constantly gushed out of the crystal ball.

It completely covered the room with blue light which made people feel like they had stepped into a dreamy world. Everyone closed their eyes tightly because of the blue light. A few children closed their eyes slowly, and tears could be seen in their eyes because of the brightness of the light.

[Spirit awakens, eyes martial spirit, innately full of spirit power 20. The Naruto Negative Emotional God System began to bind with the host. Loading..

1%..

5%..

10%.

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Listening to the prompt sound in his mind, Ye Zhiqiu was startled and then overjoyed.

After six years, Ye Zhiqiu's golden finger had finally arrived. Sure enough, cheats may be late, but they would never be absent!

"Crack.." There was a cracking sound.

Ye Zhiqiu felt the crystal ball in his hand crack, and he quickly pulled his hand back. The blue light dissipated when Ye Zhiqiu pulled his hand as if it had never appeared before.

The difference was that Ye Zhiqiu's dark black pupils had now turned into a faint scarlet. Looking closely, there was also a small tomoe slowly turning in the iris, which looked a little strange.

[T/N: Yup it's a sharingan]

This scene was so conspicuous, the scarlet pupils could basically be seen clearly by anyone who was not blind.

Su Yuntao was a little excited and roared inside. 'My god, it is innately full soul power, and it is also a mutated martial spirit.'

[T/N: Su Yuntao thought that our MC has 10 spirit power. Well as we all know that only a single person was known to have a innate soul-power of 20 so it seems reasonable that he doesn't think about it , as it will be close to impossible]

Different from Tang San's waste martial spirit, this martial spirit was very special. It had obviously not appeared in Douluo Continent. Judging from the strength of spirit power it had it should have mutated in a good direction. With a little training, Ye Zhiqiu could be regarded as a genius. He almost gave up on this genius.

Thinking of this, Su Yuntao just wanted to slap himself a few times.

Su Yuntao squatted down, put his hands on Ye Zhiqiu's shoulders, and asked softly: "My child, what is your name?"

"My name is Ye Zhiqiu."

Ye Zhiqiu was a little flustered, this guy seemed to want to recruit him into the Spirit Hall. Then should he enter or not?

Su Yuntao chuckled lightly and said, "Ye Zhiqiu? Good name, are you interested in joining the Spirit Hall? We will give you the best resources and the best practice environment. This is unmatched by any other colleges."

Su Yuntao's expression was serious and sincere.He believed that as long as he brought this child back, Spirit hall would definitely focus on this child's training.

The rest of the children were all envious at the moment, as Ye Zhiqiu was being recruited directly by someone from the Spirit Hall.

Tang San was also relieved to see this scene.

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