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Immortal.

作者: The_Auth0r
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What is Immortal.

WebNovel で公開されている、The_Auth0r の作者が書いた Immortal. の小説を読んでください。Dude gets powers of an Immortal, learning the truth that he lives in a world [Anime] with others like him.This story is purely for enjoyment purposes and is not supposed to be taken seriously. Though,...

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Dude gets powers of an Immortal, learning the truth that he lives in a world [Anime] with others like him. This story is purely for enjoyment purposes and is not supposed to be taken seriously. Though, there will be serious moments probably. Anyways, I hope you enjoy it.

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Transmigrated to another world, Because of Tinker Bell's benevolence in his past life, he was given an eternal life by the system before it encountered an error and disappeared. Now to survive in this dangerous world where the strong can kill the weak without reason, Tinker Bell has to navigate carefully and find a way to seek power, hiding the fact that he has a longer lifespan than the top-tier cultivator. ---- Imagine a world where everyone had a system of their own... It was a world where only those powerful enough survived til the end of the quest. In this story, we chance upon our MC, Tinker Bell who was sent to a world where behemoth beings roamed freely. A world that could only be found in nightmares. Tinker Bell himself succeeded to be selected by the guardian spirit of that world that gifted him a strong system and immortal life because of his benevolence in his past life. The strongest system ever. But will the leaders of that world allow him to grow? In addition, Tinker Bell met a pretty woman whom he fell in love with at first sight but this woman had already experienced a heartbreaking relationship with her past husband whom she even had a daughter with, that heartless guy left his daughter and her and never came back. Tinker Bell falling for this woman was actually a one sided love, but he didn't gave up as he tried to break the ice in her heart. -If you want to find out if whether Tinker Bell succeed in capturing her ice heart, join me, let's read together. ( WELCOME ALL ONBOARD.) - Motion G creation

alu_sachi · 現実
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MY BLACK ARSE IN A BEAST WORLD

So we all know how this goes. Girl from modern world dropped into another. It’s going to be an adventure so don’t be discouraged by my blab on why I wrote the book. Right from my black fl in a beast world, you can tell that there will be twists. I tried to make a comedy out of it but if it doesn’t work, don’t blame this baby. Yes, there’s a lot to see. Please don’t ignore the book. I’m so anxious. To be honest, I did this because I once read a book where the author had the beast women be black and she called that ugly. The beast men were all white and good looking. I wasn’t offended but I also wasn’t comfortable with that. And throughout the book, the author kept on making references such as “her skin was pale.” -hence pretty “unlike so and so from the country side with darker skin.” I really don’t take these things to heart but I believe every color is amazing and every race has an equal opportunity to be ugly or beautiful. Being dark doesn’t make someone ugly, it’s just the facial structure that determines whether or not someone is good looking. So for this book, my transmigrator is black with black attitudes. I’ve tried to make the world as sensible as I possibly can. It just makes sense to me that beastmen also had brains. They can be able to judge. I believe that though simple minded, the beast women also had some emotional development. I may stray a bit from the traditional way of writing but I hope I get it right. I tried to tag this book to reverse harem but it’s not working so I don’t know.

rotten_cabbages · 歴史
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what type of immortal are we talking about is it the xianxia immortal type or just normal type of immortal. Good concept we are with you all the though good and bad

Knight_Riku
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So far this is a great fic. Although, things were a little quick with how fast the suddenness of getting kidnapped was. It should have been slightly calm fir at least two chapters more, 3 were dedicated to family and readjusting to his return to life from his coma/death fir three years. After that it should have been two chapters or so fir MC himself and waht he dies. But instead it was kinda quick. This seems to have a good story going for it. Author also did say in comments of a chapter that this has a world building basis similar to the "Charlotte" Anime. I've seen Charlotte, and while it wasn't a bad show, it was boring. Even when the Charlotte anime mc sister died, I felt nothing fur her death. It was that boring and easily predicted. But Author is definitely making a clear Antagonistic Force that can doom the world. Be it a single powerful individual, multiple Government and greedy politicians or such. It is made clear that the world is doomed and needs to be saved. If I had to say to any new readers what to expect, then think of this as something like Charlotte or any other Superpower Anime. Maybe even like the Sky High movie (trash movie but good example). And also a mix of the Infamous game series. Infamous was a good series in its story and was such a succes fir the SuckerPunch game studios. Infamous MC Cole Maggrath, becomes a Conduit (basically means a super powered individual like XMen or on this story or Charlotte). The entire plot of Infamous is if Cole needing to become powerful enough to defeat The Beast, taht will destroy the world like Magneto, in Xmen, and unsure in an age of only Conduits. The suorise was that The Beast was actually a Conduit called John White. It is a great story and game and I hope that the Author draws inspiration from it. Maybe even have a similar Individual Antagonist, like The Beast, be a permanent power user. Only mc is permanent power user, but it can certainly open up a whole entire story with lots of potential to come from this possible idea if mine. Tbh, my personal opinion of this story should be rated as a 4.6 since it si really good, but the beginning was too rushed. When a story starts, it needs to be done nice and slowly, depending on the type of story and the follow up of events. Other than that, it is really good, but as an act of sincerity and good faith that I am not being influenced by my personal thoughts of the story, I have given 5 stars. Most people don't give a proper review or their thoughts and instead just give 5 or 2 stars all the time without proof or reasoning. I hope I made my thoughts clear for any new readers and the Author. You should definitely read this story as it is looking good and i hope it isn't dropped.

RandomDudeTbh
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I love the concept; it's completely fresh to me; I've never seen anyone have immortality before, and I can't wait to see what happens next. I'll offer my full evaluation once there are a lot more chapters.

ObamaUchiha
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the problem is the dialogue and characters, the biggest problem is probably that it's too forced and super cheesy stereotypical stuff. like when you think of a teenage school drama with vampires this comes to mind

FosterChild
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seems interesting 😃 i like your other novel even tough I don't really comment, so I'm giving five stars for the sake of it hopefully this is also good. 👍

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