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I have a shop in the Multiversal Trading Center.

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What is I have a shop in the Multiversal Trading Center.

WebNovel で公開されている、Ahad_Sheikh_8685 の作者が書いた I have a shop in the Multiversal Trading Center. の小説を読んでください。In the toughest moment of Robin's life, a beggar sells him a ring.after wearing the ring. A think-call system told him that he had become one of the shop owners of the Multiversal Trading Center and g...

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In the toughest moment of Robin's life, a beggar sells him a ring. after wearing the ring. A think-call system told him that he had become one of the shop owners of the Multiversal Trading Center and gave him two choices: if he wanted, he could become the owner of the shop, or he could just ignore it and go on with his life. Robin has nothing to lose, so he accepted the offer. Robin finds out that in the Multiversal Trading Center, there are a lot of different kinds of creatures, and they are buying, selling, and exchanging various types of technology and materials. Follow Robin and see how he became different after building a business empire. Can Robin stay as a moral human being, or will he become a corrupted human being in this unforgiving world in order to follow his dream of going to the stars?

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ro2y
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Interesting concept but story went downhill really fast. Cliche beginning gf leaves MC then beggar sold MC magical ring. He made money fast selling low tech for gold but unrealistic trades in real world happened. He sold 9000 kilos of gold to neighbor for 500m then started a company. By chapter 6 he made 70billion. The author might rethink the pace of the story and redo the novel again.

DaoistOI7IbZ
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While the story is so far is decent, it's a bit confusing considering the grammar is kind of jumbled up together. Also none of the quotations or spacing are there to separate words from actions and characters talking so that makes it confusing as well.

Rajat_Vinodiya
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This book has potential but author is developing the story too fast and because I think that English is not author's first language so the chapters can be very confusing at some points. Aside from MC the other characters lack background.

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