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I Had to Rebuild my Life

作者: Jason_Warren
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What is I Had to Rebuild my Life

WebNovel で公開されている、Jason_Warren の作者が書いた I Had to Rebuild my Life の小説を読んでください。This is the first in a collection of books detailing the adventures of Ray and his friends as they take on the nobles, magic beasts, even the Chosen themselves....

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This is the first in a collection of books detailing the adventures of Ray and his friends as they take on the nobles, magic beasts, even the Chosen themselves.

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The Dragon's Shadow

In the church's prison, a man looked at his shackles. 'Little girl... is this the ending you wanted to see?' Thinking back to that resolute and pretty face in his memory and that golden hair like the blooming sunset, Lister sighed. 'If I had known that my end will be like this, I might as well have abandoned that little useless princess, opened a small tavern, and found a woman to spend my life with.' "Man, how unlucky am I..." Lister remembered that while he was playing with these little fluffy monster girls, he used to often tease a certain witch that she would accidentally end up on the stake, making her puzzled, but he didn't expect that he would be the one to go up first. "If all this could start over... I should have chosen the monster girls after all." "Oh? Really?" A cold yet teasing voice sounded beside him. As he turned his head to look, powerful magic energy gathered and swirled, and finally, a tall female figure walked out of it. She wore a tight black dress that showed off her curvy, mature figure. Lister knew her... or rather, should have known her. 'The Sinful Dragon Demon Lord, Priscilla' "Did you really mean it when you said you'd choose monster girls?" "...I wonder if the mighty Demon Lord has decided to grace me with a heart-to-heart in this cozy little prison." "As expected of the mastermind who single-handedly helped that incompetent woman to the throne. Even now you have the energy to crack jokes?" "You flatter me. I think it's quite humanistic for a Demon Lord who has children for breakfast, lunch, and dinner to chat with a dying man in prison." "Tsk, getting upset over a little teasing already?" "Sigh, alright, I don't have much time either. Let me get to the point with you. What are you still waiting for here, waiting to die?" "I don't know, maybe waiting for a female Demon Lord to come swoop in and save me?" "You know Aurola has abandoned you. What are you still hoping for?" "...So what does this have to do with the Demon Lord? We only have a very shallow cooperative relationship; I don't think it matters if I die or not." "Of course it does." Priscilla smiled and pressed the blunt end of her dragon horn against his forehead. "Because I want you, but I'm different from Aurola. What she gave you, I can give. What she couldn't give you, I can also give. Didn't you want to choose monster girls? In the Demon Capital, there are all kinds of monster girls. You can pick whichever you like." "Then, are there fluffy and warm ones?" "...I think the ones with hard scales and slender, elegant physiques are not bad either." "Ahem, I digress." "Anyway, I understand you better than you think. As long as you come with me to the Demon Capital, I will satisfy your everything within my power. As long as you promise me one thing..." "I know." Lister picked up where Priscilla left off, smiling back at her. "You want me, right?" "What a smarty~. So, you agree?" "Mm. I'll go with you." 'And come on, it's fluffy monster girls' 'I can't refuse.'

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Tyler_Dzadik
Tyler_DzadikLv1Tyler_Dzadik

Story was well written, made me think of the old days back in history if you didn’t do what you were told todo and the consequences. The beginning of the story had a great book to grab your attention and get you into the plot. Can also be relatable for if you had siblings and wondered if anything would be different if you were in their shoes

jon_lacey
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It has potential but it is nowhere near professional novel writing standards. Use the"," more in sentence, without it makes sentences seem long and make zero sense. You need it to break up the sections of information in the sentences. Don't use"like" and "as-if" (the first time was good), you need to be defiant and explain to the reader what they should be visualizing. It is confusing when you explain the elf woman and the Chosen, who are they, give more detail before throwing them in. Develop the characters more, explain who they are, why they are there, age, height, etc. before creating a whole fight scene. And the scene didn't make much sense, you really need to explain it, give visualizes. I didn't get the lighting human part, again, more visualizations. I think you should read some other novels and books to learn how the develop cheaters. The Martian and 2001 Space Odyssey are some good books to look over to help with explanations of scenes and characters. Find writing styles you like and use it.

Will_Kelleher
Will_KelleherLv1Will_Kelleher

well written first chapter that gives the necessary background information about the main character. essentially serves as an introduction to the new world being built throughout the story. would like to read more 👍

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