I am Over Powered in Douluo Dalu [Haitus]

why the **** u make the mc cannot socialice..For gods sake he is a reincarnater frm a world where humans use mouth to live.[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

I was liking this story at first, but as the story continued it just became really bad at character progression and development. First off, with the way it is structured, it feels like the author just decided to make Zhuqing the romantic interest for the story after already writing the main characters backstory. The way he tries to introduce Zhuqing as a romantic interest and force him to train her really bothers me as before this he is depicted as a stone cold killer, but when Zhuqing threatens him he is easily coddled into saying yes without addressing the fact that he has her life in his hands and doesn't need to bend to her will, and then he also starts teaching her his clan moves and kata, which is insanely absurd considering his supposed background and the way his personality was built up to that point. My point is there was no character progression, it was just an immediate switch from stone cold killer to him having a schoolyard crush on someone that is significantly younger than him mentally. Just giving some constructive criticism, respond in the replies if you have anything you want to agree or disagree with me on.

Okay, guys, the author here is just giving himself a 5-star review. I have to fill in this content, I am writing anything until the post button is activated. Ok, it is active now. Enjoy reading the story.

Please don't quit. Please, for the love of everything good, don't quit. I love the story (despite the bad grammar) so please don't quit. Please

Can I please ask if this is truly a no harem then who the heck is a female lead please????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

great decision his martial spirits just don't drop it <3 ksisksjssisjsaiajsksksnsjsunsjsjsjsjssjsjjsjsjsjsbsjsusjsjsjsjsjjsbsjsjsjsusjsjs

i really dont know how this has such a high rating as its awful. the author does not know how to write and if he has improved at all he refused to edit his story. he somehow manages to change the pov multiple times in the same sentince over and over again. if you read the comments on the chapters you will realize he was called out on this several times and he still refused to fix it. that alone should be enough to make you not read it.

writing quality: 3/5 - there are a lot of words that has missing letters and mc's name sometimes change I'm not talking about when he enroll in the shrek academy and the spirit beast also change like the time with the one horned thunder rhinoceros to one flaming horned rhinoceros so yeah and it change the point of view with no warning and so sudden. story development: 3/5 - the time skip is not sudden but it's not explain what happen to the time skip very well like "6 years later' I am 12 now and todays mission is my 100th mission, so now i will have a vacation worth of 5 years" it didn't explain what happen to those 6 years he didn't even tell how is his progress or so on. character design: 3/5 - the mc is describe as a person who has a very little social skills and in most description he will go by like " A kid who look like a 12 years old(even tho he's muscle is supposed to be ripped) and have a height of 5'2 with a black hair and his black eyes is like devoided from emotion(you gotta put that devoid of emotion every time)" so yeah and all so he hides the fact that he is a noble with a lot of connections for what? you may ask for no apparent reason he's parents allowed him to go too..... update stability: 4/5 - it's ok the stability of update i mean background: 3/5 - it's meh average total of: 3.2/5

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i like and enjoy this story the most please update more and don't drop it! akdkwksxhdkdksksdnkesksmncrbekkeskmxnnkekeelsldkckcjcncfk

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The story is very good but you need to edit the chapters.There are wrong names in some sentences.So,You need to correct it again,that’s all I wish for.

its good man, the background, the skills, and his spirits dude so cool, the grammar are ok plus the updating speed is ok too btw that mass release is godly thank you

Very good. This review will give you a rating, :)

I really like this story and the only reason I didn't give a 5 star review is because the story is on hiatus

Приветствую, произведение понравилось, жду глав, удачи с экзаменами А если более подробно описать произведение, то получилось неплохо внедрить гг в сюжет основной истории(хоть и было это сделано на основе подавляющей силы гг,но есть и недостатки такие как: вообще не прописанное взаимодействия с персонажами ибо их мало (БОЛЬШЕ ПЕРСОНАЖЕЙ!!!!) ГГ из за этого получился картонный по сути он общался только с "девочкой пантерой" и всё,а всех остальных он только "Ху*сосил"*(*непереводимое русское слово) Оскорблял и унижал P.S. Надеюсь у вас активирован переводчик [img=recommend] Удачи

Ok so it's fine till chapter 20 then when mc opens his mouth it takes a nose dive And the carelessness and all kinds of stupid mistakes that a child would make Not a professional reincarnated assassin who has a great education and has done 100 missions If you come in expecting something like Kilua(HxH) with superman powers than you will be somewhat disappointed I should have expected this since he has a stupid system while also having man of steel power

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Please continue to the story🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 I love this story😻😻😻😻😻😻 It was very fun🤓🤓🤓 Please continue and I will always support you👍👍👍👍👍👍

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