the story seems really interesting, Cyberpunk fanfics are always welcome, especially about the anime, the author seems to have a good knowledge about the world he is writing, but unfortunately the good things to talk about end here, the dialogues are honestly bad to follow, the author uses only a "-" and writes the speech, does not say who is talking or what is doing, not only becomes boring to read, but it is also tiring, I have lost count of how many times I have had that Stop reading just to situate myself about who was talking at the time, and this was in a conversation between only two people, nor do I want to imagine the confusion that will be when there is a conversation between a group of people, another negative point is the protagonist himself, himself states that in his past life he was not used to hurting people, but a few minutes after transmigrating he casually kills more than 10 bandit on a mission, piles their bodies and even seems bothered, to finish the... Criticism, it is recommended that a reader have an prior knowledge about various things about the world, because history explains nothing about what the world is like, how things work or how they look.
