Hide and Seek(ongoing revision)

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I love the flow of the story. It is quite predictable but it's still good to read. There's a few grammatical errors but it's not a hindrance to understand the story clearly. Overall, it is good!

It really seems that it is happening in front of me or i was watching a movie Really horrible but very interesting, really awesome. But it would be great if the end was something else.

The story was scary and thrilling.......... But I have read a whole bunch of horror stories And this story was kind of famous in my town So I already knew seventy percent of the plot....... But it was prolific 💀💀💀

Hi I really like and love your book!its so amazing! I wonder if this is true or not...hmm...well I will freak out if this is real though but it’s getting so much scarier so do the next chapter please! So I could spoil this!😍😍😍😉🤩👍

The book was great over all. it made me want to download the Japanese Hide and Seek game and try it out. thanks for he good story and your writing is very good.

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Really amazed.... Horrified as well😨.... Great job.... Well done👏👏.... The way the story was presented was really nice. Just some grammatical errors. Otherwise superb work done by u😊....

I was like horrified... Once I was feeling satisfied that Tina survived the b***h but then I was shocked when I read the last line....... Some grammatical errors but other than that really interesting.. .👍😰

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The book overall is great. The story is intriguing, along with the setting of the story. The prologue is great, the characters are great. Just a few grammatical errors and spelling errors here and there. But overall, it's a good book.

Its good store to read in short time i enjoyed it and i suggest to read this too the other is a good writer andIts good store to read in short time i enjoyed it and i suggest to read this too the other is a good writer and

Short but realy thrilling. the last chapter was too long. is there repetition or something. anyway, such a goos horror story. bravo and nice..

The story was good don't get me wrong. But this author honestly needs fo works on his/her grammar. Almost there! ❤️❤️❤️ Also add more diversity. Use more words, than the basic ones. YOU GOT THIS. 😍😍😍

I like reading horror story and this story appriciates me a lot! I read it long time ago, but it still appear in my mind all the time. Love the way the author wrote.👍

The storyline is quite interesting. The author managed to grab and hold readers' attention and emotion. Great work author! Looking forward for your next story.

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After all I like the plot. The Ending yeah I was hope Tina could find the solution but It didn't end well. But, for Charles pity for him and there's no other story or description for him later in the story after ge dies

Nice story😃 but ending is okay.........................................................I thought that she will win the game but she didn't...