Hell's Eternal (Dropped)

The novel has a lot of promise and I can't wait to see where you will take it and premise of the story is really interesting and I can't wait to see where you take the story in the future.

while this maybe a bit better than all the mtl type of novels on this app but it's not great, and it gets and worse the more you get into the story if there is even a "story" to begin with

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Good it is, read it you should. Memememememememememememememememememememememememememememememememememememememememememememememememememememememe

this looks like it could be very interesting let's see what you will do....... ...............................................................

This is kind of a useless review author-san isn’t going to get any useful info out of this but nonetheless I’m putting a 5 star review up because why not it’s a great fanfic. It has two of my favorite fictional universes in it like I can’t contain myself for the up and coming chapters. So give it a read, I highly suggest it… :)

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A bit confusing at the early chaps and the monologue can get boring sometimes. Well, it's still good though [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

Has a lot of potential would have loved to not see this as early as I did so I would not have to wait long for updates &hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh&hhhhhhhhh

One of the best fanfics in this site for now. Mostly because of the overall writing quality and the mc's intelligence, since while he isn't a genius his actions actually makes sense (the update speed helps too). It also seems that there will be only 1 love interest that will come later on. Hopefully it won't be love at first sight. The mc is also quite op but it will take a lot of time for him to become the strongest. In marvel at least. I would like for him to go to the dc comics universe next. The power level is higher and there are plenty of things to do.

It's a good read. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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This is 9ne of the better written stories on here, so I'm giving it a good rating. The character design is kinda meh and the background is probally being judged unfairly since you don't have enough chapters. Also I hope you increase updates, but if you can't I'm okay. I'd rather have good quality and medium pace of posts instead of awful quality and fast pace.

if you have time can you tell us if you dropped this story you don't have to answer if you feel comfortable answering my questionㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ

How does the MC look like btw?? [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

It's a good story but i'm dropping it because of the sisters. I was really enjoying it but the sisters personality is just annoyijg to me and i get annoyed whenever they're a part of the story.

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