I have to tell you, it's sucks.... The concept is good, typical, but good... But the problem here is how you used the MC.... 1St, not to mention how much is the plothole you put in there, you just offer it up with plot armor.. OK, I can accept it.. But the contradicting, self conscious style of MC? Not so much.... He knows the book, he knows the plot, he know most general timeline for it, so why does he act like a fool????!!! He act like the world spinning around him, like he is the great MC, but the problem is he doesn't act upon it... He didn't even confirm about HP world till he met Granger family.. And about how he thought of needing to get strong, need more knowledge, need more fighting skill and survival stuff, yet he pick that godd@mn gryffindor... All the stuff he want could be found in Ravenclaw(The knowledge, the duelist champion, everything is in ravenclaw).. The only darn thing he should do is to quickly increase his own arsenal but nnnnooooooo, he need to freaking go to the most useless house of all instead of hardworking and kind senior house or duelist champion and grove of knowledge house or even potion master house albeit reluctantly... Yeah, good job MC, just wait till your parents die..
