FAMILY ABOVE ALL: BATTLING AGAINST GODS

The writing quality is good, but not as good as it could be. I think that the story develops way too quickly from the start. Rita is a pretty good character. Overall, the book is good, but has lots more potential.

The first few chapters of this story showcase a mix of different genres, including fantasy, comedy, and adventure. The author's writing style is engaging and descriptive, which allows readers to easily visualize the scenes in their minds. The characters are distinct and have unique personalities that make them interesting to follow, and the dialogue between them is well-written, with humor and wit sprinkled throughout. However, there are some areas that could be improved upon. The transitions between different scenes and perspectives could be smoother to prevent confusion, and there are some grammatical errors and typos that could be corrected with thorough editing. Additionally, some parts of the story feel rushed, especially toward the end where a lot of information is presented in a short amount of time. Overall, the story has potential but could benefit from some editing and revisions to improve the pacing and clarity of the story.

I really enjoyed the first 10 chapters. The writting is amazing and really engages the reader. I also like how you started at the beginning with the pov.

I'm hooked on this story! The characters are beautifully designed and the plot is really starting to take shape. 🤗 Can't get enough of the amazing character designs in this story! 😍 This story keeps getting better and better! Loving the way the plot is developing. 📖

The scenes and the writing quality is amazing.

The settings reminds me of "Black Clover." The writing quality is amazing, and while the conversations can be a bit better, the story itself is marvelous. Keep up the great work, author!

This has the signs of a legendary adventure... Regardless of where the story goes, I'm already in love with the characters. I am ready to go on this amazing journey with @littlegiant7

a good book worth the read; the descriptions are great and the characters are well portrayed. I highly recommend!

This is a great fantasy novel. The characters are funny, and its awesome that you can't guess what would happen next. The fights are simply epic. I highly recommend.

It is a nice story that touches in the family sphere as the angular stone. Some of the interactions are really enjoyable to read. Things to improve: Grammar: Some redundancy and hard sentences make it block the flow of the reader. Characters: While I liked the interaction between characters. It misses some inner thoughts on the making for the characters. Using subtext would create more connection with the public. All in all, keep the good work

Really liking what I am reading. There was enough suspense and make you want to continue reading. It was fun too. The world is introduced slowly and not too descriptive (not excessively) which is a good point. Great work author!

Strong start! Great world-building :) I can't wait to see what happens next with these characters. I found the concept very interesting and the writing intriguing, keep up the good work!