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Dungeon Overlord System

作者: Glasgow1
Magical Realism
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What is Dungeon Overlord System

WebNovel で公開されている、Glasgow1 の作者が書いた Dungeon Overlord System の小説を読んでください。Alternate Title: F-Rank Dungeon KingAt one point during the history of humanity, things changed drastically. Magic was revealed to have always existed, lying under our eyes but remaining unseen. While...

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Alternate Title: F-Rank Dungeon King At one point during the history of humanity, things changed drastically. Magic was revealed to have always existed, lying under our eyes but remaining unseen. While that energy strenghtened humanity, it also brought it's load of calamities in the form of pocket dimensions whose gates opened all over the world. Those dimensions named dungeons were the very spark that created the golden age of humanity, an age in which anyone who could use magic could become anything. However some people decided that they wanted more power, more money, more everything. Those people were named the Hunters, greedy madmen entering dungeons in search of exciting adventures and tons of treasures. So now, what happens when one of them just so happens to acquire the greatest treasure of all...A dungeon itself ? ///////// Any sort of feedback will be very much appreciated.

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Accidentally Meet

……….. ………. ……… …….. She whisper to herself "It's fine, as she doesn't know him". She then stopped the cab in front of a coffee shop and wish herself the best. She encounters a quite complex scene when a customer tend to order food and drinks which doesn't offered there. She explained gently and respectfully to them but they're quite stubborn and called her manager. One guy stood up and said "I'm sorry, but this is a coffee shop."He said with a stern and powerful aura. They looked and greet him with respect. They whisper " that's Ian Arthur. He's handsome and a great businessman. I heard that he owns lots of things in our country ". The other one said " I would love if he's fancy on me." .... "HaHaHa..who can charm him better than me".. another one said " You can only dream ....hahaha".... "well, who knows ... he picks one of us". They ordered Claire to leave them and continue chit-chatting. Claire feels that she's nearly get fired and make her body stern. She continues serve the others until it's time to go. She get her paycheque and head to the main entrance. She then bump to a guy " Sorry, i didn't mean to...." Before she even finished it.... He said " You should see where you heading.You might get someone hurt." And headed to his fancy Maserati. Claire got speechless and get home walking. She's miserable when she thinks of what a day she had today. Apart from that, she should be bold as she had her VIVA for her master degree. However, she still feel in debt with the Ian Arthur as he help her encounter the situation this morning. Door bells ringing and suddenly she remembered that Lilly A.K.A her stepsister had said that she'd invited her for a sleepover at her place. Lilly drop by and they had a great chit-chatting. Lilly said "You know what, Dad just give me an Audi TT as a birthday gift." Claire feels quite uncomfortable when she said the word "Dad" as before they became family, Lilly likes to bully her a lot and her stepmother married her father after her mom's death of Cancer. It's hard to believe that both of them are family. Lilly whispered to her heart " well, I will show you that your dad will go against you and love me more." She plastered her face with fake smile and think about how to despise Claire out of the family. Through her chit-chatting, she now knows how to make her know her place in their family. Claire doesn't realise that Lilly still has urged against her although they're family now. She just ignored her bad feelings towards Lilly and try to be friendly as always. ……….. ……….. ………..

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ra11y
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Theres only been a few chapters so far so this is an early review but... Writing Quality: This one was unexpectedly good. The author has a good comman of english and I haven’t spotted any typos or grammatical errors. The sentence structure is well paced and varies from line to line to keep things flowing. Story and character development: The main character has a depth to him, and the plot itself feels realistic and raw. The characters are multifaceted and not just boring stock characters. I really felt the emotion during the appearance of the second creature. (Intentionally Vague to avoid spoilers) World background: Too early tp say much, but what has been revealed so far has been done through more show rather than tell. I love that. Overall, this book has the potential to become a gem. Author, please don’t drop this novel :)

ImaginationGalaxy
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I gave this a try, I really did. But after finishing the prologue (chapter 17), I just didnt have any interest to continue reading. A lot of stuff at the beginning is so confusing and nothing is explained. It leads to a ton of guess work, and even then its difficult to keep track of stuff. It’s hard to tell if the author just didnt want to explain the stuff and expected it to be understood, or if they were trying to make it sound interesting.

Orenji_
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this story has a good start !! ![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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i havent read the novel yet although the novel synopsis looks interesting though is it translated novel? 🙂😊😇☺😁☺😁😊😁😊😆😊😆😊😆😊😆😇🙃😇😇

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