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DC: Jackie Chan Adventures

作者: DrakeBerger
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born in Gotham living in a warehouse. after work trying to make a life for himself but who would have guessed that a dragon would crash in and followed by heroes and with their power they banish the dragon only for Alex to get sucked in as well. Watch as Alex Survives and gain powers and come back stronger. All events and stories take place on Earth 16 the young justice universe. All DC and Jackie chan Adventures properties belong to their respective owner’s this is for fun.

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TiagoRits
TiagoRitsLv10TiagoRits

Espero ansioso pelo desenvolvimento. MC x Ravena. .............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

yokedjaguar
yokedjaguarLv14yokedjaguar

The grammar is the biggest issue. Honestly if you just reread what you write there wouldn't be half the mistakes in a single paragraph. As your not doing that words are missing letters, there are misspells, no capitalization, I could go on and on. The character interactions and dialog also needs some cleaning up, besides that it has a decent plot. You just need to proofread yourself or get a proofreader.

DrakeBerger
DrakeBerger作者DrakeBerger

Shameless writer saying this is the best Jackie chan adventures fan-fic ever. if you like it please leave a review. If you have an idea let me know and thank you for reading.

carrotpie
carrotpieLv5carrotpie

Good potential but goes to fast skipping a lot of detail, trying to make emotional scenes before we have made any connection with the characters, and the grammars off .

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Kami12
Kami12Lv6Kami12

This story great so far I looking forward to seeing it reach its full potential. Keep up the good work author. As lord Kami I approve this message.

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