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Cultivando en Avatar

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WebNovel で公開されている、Lameraverga2048_12 の作者が書いた Cultivando en Avatar の小説を読んでください。Desperte en el cuerpo de otra persona en medio del bosque. esto no puede ser peor ¿verdad?Me estas diciendo que hay espiritus debajo de la montaña que devoran hombres?Una tortuga gigante que habla, es...

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Desperte en el cuerpo de otra persona en medio del bosque. esto no puede ser peor ¿verdad? Me estas diciendo que hay espiritus debajo de la montaña que devoran hombres? Una tortuga gigante que habla, espritus que devoran hombres, y personas que pueden crear fuego de la nada....estoy en Avatar? ................................................ Planeo hacer un fanfic de avatar ya que no hay muchos decentes, si buscas escenas subidas de tono o mujeres sin cerebro entonces no lo leas. Voy a tratar de hacer lo mejor posible, puedes hacer comentarios constructivos para ayudar a mejorar la historia, aviso que las actualizaciones no van a ser constantes

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