Critique of Web Novels

Fragments

Alexis has lost her memory and she doesn't remember anything except from the fact that whoever she was before, she really did something to attract a lot of attention. Especially if a unknown man is after her to finish her off for good .

Fullbringer: The Supreme

This is the story of a young Fullbringer and how he leaves his legend on the way to the peak. The present world is One piece and the MC will travel to other world's in the future. Disclaimer : One piece is the property of Eiichiro Oda and it has nothing to do with the author of this book. Fullbringer is from Bleach and is the property of Tite Kubo. The cover art is made by StarMasayume. Link : http://fav.me/d6wvczo

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Empire Of The Mind

What are dreams. What is reality. What if they were one and the same. For Sean Davis they are. His body is of earth. But his soul of another world. Join him as he grows up on two worlds galaxies apart and across time itself. Are you a valian? Does Endurra call to you too? What is the soul really? Can we use its energy to power devices for the protection of the universe? Can we fragment our soul to power swarms of constructs? Does sex play a part in unlocking genetic memories and genes? Can it be used as a tool of war? Follow Venu krall as he is guided by his future self, a fragment of his own soul. To find lost unfinished artifacts. The last hope of the six races to defend against the darkness of the universe. A collective of Races so evil that they will destroy everything not of their own. Devastating entire galaxies to grow stronger and feed their hunger for power. What will it take Venu to unify a world of convicts of six races. Thousands of miles apart. What will he do to protect himself and the millions of people on the planet from constant attacks from the sky. Will he parish or rise and become what the scientists were working towards. What will this mean for the life of Sean Davis. Will he adapt? Will it shape how he develops as a person. Will he find a higher calling? What will this all lead towards?

* kisah PPMI* pekerja pelaut migran Indonesia***"

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Being part of an Olympic skating pair should be excitement enough for one life, but for Erika that's only the beginning. Her skating partner, Tom Alan, is her ex-husband, who fell in love with former British ice dancer Milo, and all three of them live together and raise her daughter, whose father is Erika's ex-boyfriend, Bill, a rabid hockey fan who is old friends with Milo.<br><br>Whew!<br><br>As if that's not enough, Erika still loves Bill, loves Tom Alan, and might just love Milo, too. Add a couple of troubled teenagers to the pile, and suddenly training for the Olympics is the easy part.<br><br>But Erika's never been a fan of the conventional, and one way or another the four of them will find a way to make their strange tangle of love, sex, and family work.

Aku Ingin Bebas

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The man who became the Symbol of Justice (MHA)

You could say: "A man Ember Zekay, unfortunately died during a accident and ended up meeting a heavenly deity or god who took an intrest in him. After a small chat, the deity asked Ember would he like to be reincarnated, and where, with what wishes. Ember Zekay, now reincarnated into the world of MHA with the powers of the Magma Magma Fruit and various Haki abilities, takes on the mantle of becoming "the symbol of justice" while taking advantage and his second life. All the while not knowing that the heavenly God he spoke to, was watching his, all for its own entertainment.. I am new to writing, so do be patient as I will do my best to get more experience to provide great and fun chapters for all readers I do not have a schedule for chapters, but the first chapter of this story should be out by Friday-Sunday as I would like to take this time to plan everything. Have a wonderful day/night :D.

Fallen From The Stars

After losing his family and home to a pack of vampires, he sets for Marcellous. One night after being attacked by a rock demon, two people Kayla and Skyla. Now it's up to them to stop the demons leashed upon Earth.

Uncovering the Goddess of Death

Casandra believes that magic is for desperate people who gave up on their chances of victory. The world is a harsh place where people abuse one another and you must have a thick skin to make it. Forgiveness is not on her list of attributes. While on a trip to Alexandria with her archeologist father, she discovers an ancient crown which changes everything. The crown opens her eyes to a world of the dead, where dwells a young man who sets her world into a spiral. He shows her that many of her assumptions about her place in life, her ideas of reality, and most importantly, what she felt love was, are not real after all. The two set off across the desert and even speak to the ancient voices of the oracles discovering who they are and were meant to be. The entwining love between them blossoms as they grow on their journey of adventure, battles, and struggles to become complete. Uncovering the Goddess of the Dead is created by Emily Concannon, an eGlobal Creative Publishing author.

SHADE

Lovestruck

This book inevitably comes under a not-so-typical romance - where all a girl wants to do is to figure out her life instead of getting caught up in all the lovers around her. This novel involves a girl Jess who was somewhat happy in her relationship with fiance Jace however, after an unexpected situation on their anniversary (when they book a trip abroad) Jess breaks out of that bound in order to discover what she is really capable of despite all the obstacles. The future for Jess... unsure of that however, I can assure you all that it will be a memorable one!

Lustrous Heart

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Its After Harry's 6th year and start of the summer of his 7th Sirius is pardoned Petigrew was captured harry still has to go to the Dursley's and things go very wrong even before they get back to Private Drive. Snarry Fic

OP: Heavenly Demon King

This is purely fan-fiction. It's just a way for me to practice my English whilst writing something enjoyable.

Silent Death: Machines of Desolation

Die a silent death?- or try fighting for your life against mysterious killer machines, even though you don’t know when this hell will end.

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Skyborn:Resurrection

Set in an alternate version of Earth, meteors rain down upon Terra. But there is more to these meteor storms than meets the eye. Experience the emergence of a new breed of Terran, the Skyborn, as they navigate their place in a world already filled with diversity. Two young individuals, one with a mysterious past and the other with an uncertain future, find themselves entangled in a dangerous plot that involves them more than they could have ever imagined. Can they unravel the mysteries and stop the impending disaster before it's too late?

Inferior

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Girls Love Series #1: Confession Note

Laine, the music club president who had a trauma on her past and promised herself to never ever date a man again. Rei, a varsity player who needs to join an organization as what their professor told them.

Dropped(quit)

Valentine once was the #1 assassin who ended up in hell after he died after making a deal with the devil to be the butler of the devil's son on earth for 1000 years he finally finished his deal. 1000 years where he helped master cause the apocalypse. on the 1000th year heaven fell and the devil turned Valentine into the embodiment of chaos and named him Jester. Join jester as he travels the multiverse and nightmares looking for his lost love Roxanne. (I don’t own the any game, show, anime, novel, or cartoon that will be in the story, I don’t own this cover picture) (This story will be irregular release times)

Mr Perfect

My Amnesia Man

Skyler Era De Chavez, a girl who can't move on from her past because she still love her ex-boyfriend that she thought that he died. But what if after two years, she met a guy that looks like her ex-boyfriend, what will she do?!

Celestial Mission

"A story of a broken teen" Imagine a girl relatable but not so relatable at the same time. You won't know what she's thinking, what she's feeling with her calm face she always displays. People say she's arrogant, full of herself and that she thinks that she's better than everyone. But is that really the case? Zoey Fraser is a closed off outcast of two worlds. In which one she ran away from and the other just didn't accept her. She lives in a fine line between reality and insanity as she goes through her Highschool years The only thing that ever makes most of her life is her friend who has one of the most vivacious personalities. So what happens when a Highschool party gets her into an unexpected encounter with the school's misunderstood trouble maker that threatens the life of her best friend. She takes the will to do whatever it takes to protect her. Her selfless act seems to be the small tip of beginning for a big turn to take place on her dull life being the mere reason for her finding herself in a strayed city she knows nothing about.

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Towgu

A guy in his 20's felt the lack of motivation in his life and the exhaustion of everything that is happening around him. How can he motivate himself to rise?

The Tale of the Second Dimension

A story about a girl who has to face the consequences of exploring the secrets of both the second and the first dimension. Read the first chapter to find out more.

In Love With A Criminal- Part One

The Great King Utto Karba

A Child is Born with great fate in a small tribe. One day great catastrophe descend on his clan and his journey to seek revenge and fulfill his promise...... this is my first time writing .. so please be free to give me your opinion .. this kind of story you may have seen many times .. lol bammmm sorry chapter will be short so fvking short that i even hate myself

About Love (Right man wrong man)

Sinopsis Sebagai penyiar yang membawakan acara dimalam.hari terkadang memiliki banyak suka duka untuk seorang Beani yang biasa dipanggil Bee oleh orang orang disekitarnya, gadis blateran parancis sunda ini amat menyukai musim karena kesukaannya akan musik dia tetap menjalanin pekerjaanya dengan santai, walaupun neneknya sangat khawatir jika bee harus pulang malam dengan menggunakan motor. Suatu hari produser meminta membawakan program berbagi yang dimana thema dari acara itu tentang kisah sehari-hari pendengarnya baik yang senang ataupun tidak namun secara live . Hingga satu saat seorang pendengar bercerita bahwa dia terobsesi pada bee dan ia ingin seperti bee, pria misterius ini selalu setia hadir disetiap program yang hanya seminggu sekali bee bawakan ini herannya dia sama sekali tidak membuat bee takut karena dia malah membuat bee tertawa. Namun lama kelamaan bee merasa aneh dengan Pria yang mengaku bernama Dimas ini karena dia selalu tau apa yang dilakukan Bee setiap harinya.

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How I Became the Hero's Sacrifice

OK. I wanted to become the HERO, but how did I become the SACRIFICE for him?

CERETA REMAJA HOT

MOHON DIBAWAH UMUR JANGAN DISINI GUA GK INGIN GERUSAK YG MUDA PLESE UDAH GUA INGETIN GUA GK TANGGUNG JAWAB OK.

what's in a name?

Everything Changes when Dream who is a middle school student, with a rare condition that keeps her sleeping, finds what she needs in the strangest place.

3-PROTAGONISTS

In my world, I’m a reader, and you’re the unfortunate fallen hero of a novel. In his world, he's a gamer, and you're a brave hero who’s later shrouded in tragedy. A hero whose role in the world was stolen by him. In the search for a better ending, the world was engulfed in greater ruin. But why must you share the same fate as the rest of the world? In your world, what am I? A third protagonist who will hasten the world to brick? Or someone who will return the solace you lost? Was it the world of a game or a novel? Perhaps a reality hidden behind fallacies. Would the answer for the correct end reveal itself? *** Slow-paced story focused on the third variable's daily life for a while. Litrpg was only applicable for the second protagonist, the MC of the novel, as he's the only one that possessed the system. Also, it will take time before the paths of the three of them cross. It's not a great novel, though I try to improve it whenever possible. Bear with me, and I hope you like it. Updated schedule: Tuesday and Saturday. posted on: SH and RR

Harry Potter and the Return of the Wild Elves

What if Harry was prince of a race of Elves long thought to have been extinct? Only said Elves are not quite as dead as the people of Tamriel had thought. Rather, the Ayleids have been cursed and bound to servitude for centuries, but that curse will soon be broken when the Ayleids find their king. How will Nirn and Earth handle the second coming of the Ayleid Empire with Harry Potter as their king? I don't own Harry Potter nor The Elder Scrolls Online WARNING: HARRY X MERIDIA! (Light/Good Harry! Intelligent/Cunning Harry! Powerful/Godlike Harry!)

Cloud Beside Rainbow

"...jika kau hanyalah sebuah mimpi, aku akan mengatakan. Kau mimpi yang indah, namun menyedihkan. Jika perasaan ini bisa aku kendalikan, aku akan membuang semua penyesalan ku. Mencoba maju selangkah, Kau meraih tangannya dan pergi menjauh, tidak perlu menggambar sebuah garis, kita hanya teman." - IKON 'BEST FRIEND'