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Creation's Fallen Gods

作者: Dark_Flower
Sci-fi
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What is Creation's Fallen Gods

WebNovel で公開されている、Dark_Flower の作者が書いた Creation's Fallen Gods の小説を読んでください。In a future world millions of years ahead, magic and technology coexist normally. What is known as human beings are living in countless planets now. Lots of hybrid races evolved and the relations insi...

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In a future world millions of years ahead, magic and technology coexist normally. What is known as human beings are living in countless planets now. Lots of hybrid races evolved and the relations inside the Imperial Conglomerate are calmly resolving after the ending of the Great Xenophobic War between the greatest racial groups: the Jomons and Brards. Alésia Latrell, a common Brard had her life completely changed after being forced to become the new guardian of a universal treasure, strong enough to even take her life. Now, beyond take the title and change moving to another planet, she needs to face the pain and the responsibilities of her new powers. ------------- I'll post more as soon as possible. But I have not too much time to keep posting every day, so the chapters are been translated and edited to be posted all together in one go. ------------- Here are some other things you should know: 1) There is some romance in this novel, but that is not the main focus. It converge elements of magic and scifi, besides some psychological and violent plots. 2) This novel is a translation. Original title: "Deuses Caídos da Criação" (DCC) I'm the author, but I'm translating it to English on my own, to learn from the process. So if you find and errors, feel free to report then to me. 3) In my main language, the novel is already at the 180+ chapters, so I'll try to bring as much as possible to you, so I hope you to enjoy.

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Hero of beginning or end

This is story is about Leon Cromwell who weild two contracting concept beginning and end as a weapon to save the world. Leon who following his friend max to hospital to see his sick sister who suffer from corrosive heart the incurable disease.max and Leon meet the healer who was responsible for max sister amaya.max was heartbroken from healer words who said Amaya didn't have much time left. Leon and max enter operation ward to see Amaya. "brother am I going to die" Amaya asked. "no i will save you even if I go to the end of the world"max said. "but healer said i didn't have much time left"Amaya speak as her voice quivered from heavy emotions. "don't say that I i... will definitely. save you"without able to control his emotions he started to cry. "brother please don't cry sniff ..."Amaya said as tears trickled from her eyes. sniff..sniff.. "how could I ?"said max max and Amaya are twins with fiery red hair.They are commoners.even though max is commoners he and Leon are best friends.so Leon also see Amaya as his sister so to see her in this state Leon also saddened. suddenly Amaya condition worsened.leon ,max and Amaya are 7 years old. The healer started to check her body said"her condition is worsening.To cure her we must find the recently dead or in como adventure who has no chance of living with strong soul to have heart transplant surgery because heart devouring disease also affect soul .so we also need to cut down down affected part of the soul to replace the heart. later the soul will automatically heal with the help of magic crest" the second healer who is asistant of the first healer said"but that is impossible because strong soul adventure are master stage.They aren't cabbages to find anywhere." hearing the what second healer said max began to loss hope. suddenly Leon said "healer use my heart to replace her heart my dad said I have strong soul as master stage" second healer said"kid don't play jokes" Leon said "i am serious " max said "no you cannot do that. i cannot lose even you.healer take my heart instead" Leon said"no max.you cannot do that.your soul not strong enough.don't worry I will be fine.All you need to do that is channel mana into my left eye after my dead ok.i have no plan about dieing early" max said"thank you Leon thankyou i always will be grateful.how to repay this favour?" Leon place hand in max shoulder and said"that is what friend's for" with Leon help Amaya saved. As told max channel mana into Leon left eye. their he widness miracle .Leon body with green glow from his eye his dead body reverted to his orginal healthy state alive. Leon suddenly woke up with cheeky smile said"damn being at the dead door is sure is thrilling" max was dumb founded by what he witnessed. This is how the story of the Leon Cromwell who name strike fear against gods and the same name who bring hope for friends and allies story starts. first novel so please adjust ok and English is my second language so if you have any complaint please post in comments.please give reviews if the the story good or not.so i didn't emparess myself

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Half_Bowl_Fairy
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I already read in Portuguese until about the 70th chapter or almost. My tip, a bos launch rate is essential here. It does not matter if the story is good but the launch rate is bad because if you do not treat the audience seriously the novel is not going to get public. Readers are equal drug addicts, we will give you our power stones in exchange for the chapters, we feed and make us addicted to your novel, then you will have a loyal audience. A good launch rate will ensure public, public guarantees power stones, which in turn ensures ranking position and the higher the position in the ranking the more readers attracts. It is a cycle, feed it and you will succeed, after all your novel is great, the translation I am not able to evaluate properly. I'll be rooting for you, for your novel and for the success of both.

Berj
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Having read this before in portuguese, I can say that you guys are in for a wild and amazing ride. The history is rich and the world is very amazing. That and the small details in the history itself makes this a very good pick.

SabersmanDancer
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It's a bit confusing at first, a lot of missing information. I know it must be a mystery, but knowing nothing makes me frustrated. It seems to have a lot of potential, but I feel lost in the first chapters. More, author I need more. How about 2 chapters a day? I would give 4 or 4.5.

Prometheus
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Really ingenious novel. It takes you on a trip to another universe, very well designed and full of secrets that I hope will be all revealed in the future. My curiosity got the best of me, so I'll go read it in portuguese.

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EldestDragon2
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I loved what is available for this novel. The characters are great, the world setting is very well done, and you can easily get lost in this book. I just wish the other was consistently releasing chapters. It's been a month since the last update.

EldestDragon2
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Get past the first 10 chapters before you judge the book. The translation quality is consistently getting better as the author/translator gets more fluent with English. Alright, now that that's out of the way. This book is very well written and will drag you into the world. I just binged all the chapter available in one go. I will definitely continue to support this author! He is very good at depicting the characters in an authentic way. He builds the world setting well and doesn't make you fall asleep doing it. I love how you slowly get a feel for the world as the MC discovers how different everything is away from her home planet. I would suggest this book for anyone interested in sci-fi and magic!

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